Thor Odinson <lfp6@yahoo.com> wrote:

My apologies to the members of the list for:

1. not telling you readers that the aforementioned fic is a draft, and

2. that comments and criticisms are heavily desired.

Well, putting my strong dislike for SIs aside... the problem with this
story is that there's no conflict. Your avatar obviously doesn't dislike
the situation, and I rather doubt his being fixed up with your favorite
Ranma babe will change that. This leaves me as a reader with no reason
to care about the story. A content character is a dull character. Wish
fulfillment is nice to daydream about, but it generally doesn't make for
a very engaging story.


Gary Kleppe
http://www.execpc.com/~kleppe/comics