Subject: Re: [FFML] [Ranma 1/2][Fanfic][Lime] The Plunge
From: kleppe@execpc.com (Gary Kleppe)
Date: 2/5/1999, 10:28 AM
To: ffml@ffml.fanfic.com

This might have made a good *ending* for a fic. (Well, there is the
slight matter of finding believable circumstances under which Ranma
would do this; I suggest taking the route that Megane 6.7 used in "All
Good Things.") As the *whole* fic, this really doesn't work
dramatically, because there's no conflict. Right from the beginning of
the fic, everyone is pretty much resigned to what's going to happen.


Gary