| Subject: Re: [FFML] [Ranma 1/2][Fanfic][Lime] The Plunge |
| From: kleppe@execpc.com (Gary Kleppe) |
| Date: 2/5/1999, 10:28 AM |
| To: ffml@ffml.fanfic.com |
This might have made a good *ending* for a fic. (Well, there is the slight matter of finding believable circumstances under which Ranma would do this; I suggest taking the route that Megane 6.7 used in "All Good Things.") As the *whole* fic, this really doesn't work dramatically, because there's no conflict. Right from the beginning of the fic, everyone is pretty much resigned to what's going to happen. Gary