Subject: Re: [ffml][author's frist fanfic][sm/zelda] Usagi no Densetsu! Mamoru e Kako, Prologue
From: David Johnston
Date: 2/4/1999, 2:12 AM
To: DRGDevil@aol.com
CC: ffml@fanfic.com

Hasn't grabbed me so far.  Frankly, it doesn't make a lot of sense.  I think you
need to slow down a little, and give some exposition.