Interesting concept, it started a little slow but picked up
towards the end. Kill the postscripts though, in a fanfic
they are neither desirable or practical. An extra paragraph
in the story accomplishes the same thing and makes the story
more readable.
I liked the basic concept of Ranma meeting the Senchi this
way, I would think that would be very annoying after a
while.

--
Rick Robinson
RICHARDROBINSONJR@prodigy.net


If violence is not solving your
problems you're just not using enough of it.

     Misato

"I guess I'm just an old-fashioned sentimentalist at heart.
I refuse
 to accept a no-win scenario.  I hate the thought of a
universe without
 justice.  If the maneuverings of dark powers can't be
exposed and
 defeated by the pure of heart, then there's no point in
anything.  I
 can't believe that."
                               -- Benjamin Hutchins