Alright; usually I will leave these alone, but this one I just can't.  Maybe the 
author's tone just irked me, or maybe I am having a bad day, but here we go.


Myrriden wrote:

	My friend, this fic sucked for several reasons:

Oh.. good constructive start.  Can you be a little more suportive?

	1; Parasite Eve was a game made _only_ to test a new engine for
future rpgs.  It was not given a true plot, or even a decent length,
despite the praise it recieves in reviews.  It is not suitable for a
cross-over of any sort.

Umm.. Bite me.  I liked the game, and yes, it did have a decent plot.  I'm 
really sorry if YOU didn't like it, but that does not mean that it was horrid.  
Thank you, play agian.

	2; The format was horrible.  The sentences were rambling and
fragmented, you put commas in the wrong spots, etc.  Go over the bitch
with a fine tooth comb _before_ you submit it.

I have to agree with the sentement of this paragraph, if not the format.  
Rambling, commas in the wrong spot, and aren't numbers offset with a colon?

	3; You crossed the two ideas in all the wrong ways.  Pokemon get
their powers from mitochandria as much as Ranma does.  I.E. _NONE_.
	

Let me guess; you are the expert on where Pokemon get their powers?  You have 
worked out the entire physics behind it?  I am ASSUMING you are saying Pokemon 
energy comes from ki (or chi,if you prefer).  Here is a question... where does 
that come from?  Could it be possible that it comes FROM mitochandria?  
Hmm...power from within... heightened energy levels...

I have nothing against C&C.  I really wish people would C&C my own works.  
However, keep it constructive.  Unless of course your own ego is so small you 
have to cut other people down... (yes, I know, I know).   Please send any 
response to this to my e-mail address.  

Once more, 
Bite me.