My friend, this fic sucked for several reasons:

	1; Parasite Eve was a game made _only_ to test a new engine for
future rpgs.  It was not given a true plot, or even a decent length,
despite the praise it recieves in reviews.  It is not suitable for a
cross-over of any sort.
	2; The format was horrible.  The sentences were rambling and
fragmented, you put commas in the wrong spots, etc.  Go over the bitch
with a fine tooth comb _before_ you submit it.
	3; You crossed the two ideas in all the wrong ways.  Pokemon get
their powers from mitochandria as much as Ranma does.  I.E. _NONE_.
	
	There are other things I could point out, but I haven't the time,
nor the wont.  Here's a suggestion;  Go over it, fix up the errors, fix
your plot holes, explain when and where Ash found Mew II, etc.
	It will never recieve the best of attention, but it would be a
much smoother read.
	
	cy

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