S M I L E
A tale of knights, past and present.
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Part 1: Ghosts of the Past
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I didn't read this the first time around, but I'm glad I gave it a try
today. Interesting stuff.
Knight Sabers... an organization created to bring down a
tyranical corporation, created by a tyranical corporation?
Sweet, sweet.
:)
Ah, this is the famous "Emoticon Transition."
"It's not like that!" protested Linna. "I've got two
tickets to Pagliacci and I don't wanna go alone."
Just out of curiosity, is that a real word?
Dr. Vess sighed and rubbed his temples. The S.M.I.L.E.
project was, overall, a joy to work on. They'd made major
breakthroughs in behavioural sciences and predicting what
the human mind would do.
Ah, so Momus is patterned after Pee-Wee Herman and Rush Limbaugh?
He was a Genom wage slave, one of thousands. He had a
simple life and a simple job. Move machine A into room B
and install.
Yeoman Smith?
The elevator opened with a modest 'ping', revealing a madly
grinning corpse.
Oh. You know, I had to read this twice to get it. My fault, I think, for
not keeping the crossover in mind.
...
Hey, pretty good. Unlike yours truly, I suspect you stayed awake during
English class. Excellent writing. ...Pretty good story, too! :) <- yikes
-- Craig Putnam
Sailor Singularity