Subject: Re :[FFML][MST][Bliss]
From: Deedo Hibiki
Date: 1/26/1999, 7:36 AM
To: FFML
CC: sterman@uswest.net
Reply-to:
deland@club-internet.fr

Rihcard Lawson wrote :

They pushed through some strangely thick branches,
tangled by vines, leaves obscuring their vision until
Ukyo and Akane had to finally yank on one vine together.
Tugging didn't work, so they pulled with all their
strength together.

<Akiko is snoring loudly>

Minmei:  HEY!

Akiko: <jerking upright>   Wha?

Minmei:  That's not nice.

Akiko:  Well, dammit, nothing is happening, and it's taking a long time
to
accomplish that.

Richard:  It, er, could be setting up the atmosphere, establishing
characterization...

Akiko:  All that's been done before.  Really, this whole scene from
waking
up in the morning to right here is drawn out, accomplishes little, and
is,
to be blunt, boring.  A lot of this stuff could have been accomplished
in
much less space.

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Well, if you really want to read something quick, read mangas and comics
only... The point in written works above drawn works is that you can
take your time to "set the mood". 
Personally, I think the descriptions were useful and beautiful

Sorry for the english mistakes, I'm getting worse with each passing day
(doesn't ANYONE dare comment on that !!! ^_-)

Deedo