Anand Rao wrote:
Donny,
For a guy who claims that he can't write fight scenes, you've done a great
job with this one!
Thanks. Yes, very bad at them. Takes me quite awhile just to write one
paragraph :(
Musta been hard to come up with a way for Ranma to 'surprise' Vegita, but I
think you pulled it off reasonably well.
Vejita is in his sixties and has been fighting since he could walk. It
would take someone as adaptable or unusual like Ranma to get him
surprised.
I look forward to seeing how the other DBZ characters get involved in this.
They should be showing up a lot more in the next few chapters.
Later,
Anand
Thanks for the comments! ^_^