Incredible.  I just checked your findings out with Word and confirmed them.
I guess that discounts immediately using the Kincaid ratings as any basis.
Unless, of course, my emails really ARE more sophisticated than my
stories...scary.

Draxonx@bellsouth.net

-----Original Message-----
From:	Ranma Al'Thor [mailto:ranma@falcon.cc.ukans.edu]
Sent:	Friday, January 22, 1999 5:41 PM
To:	Doug Murphy
Cc:	ffml@fanfic.com
Subject:	Re: [FFML] Reading Clancy good for writing?

On Fri, 22 Jan 1999, Doug Murphy wrote:

that might be applicable in fanfic practice.

Then I went back to Sublimation after 160 some odd pages of R.6 and
performed the obligatory grammar check.  Word informed me that I had a
measly 5.3 grade level average reading level in the story, with a

miniscule

2.3 sentences per paragraph rating.

Just out of curiosity, I ran your email message through the grammar
checker on WordPerfect and Microsoft Word.

WordPerfect gave your message a 9.51 grade level, so apparently you
become almost twice as sophisticated a writer when you write an email
message as when you actually write a story.

Microsoft Word gave you a 9.7, so apparently the act of opening your mail
in another program increased your grade level.

Honestly, I think that
1.  The grade level doesn't mean much.  The Word Perfect one listed a
Hemingway story with a grade level of 4.

2.  a .4 difference is likely simply the result of minor changes in
content or vocabulary.  I don't know what the experimental error is for
something like this, but considering I got a .2 variation on what was
allegedly the same grading method on two different programs with exactly
the same file...To take a second example.  I took the first screen of Nine
Princes in Anime.  It got a 1.5.  I added the second screen and suddenly
it was a 1.8.  I added the third screen of text from the story.  Up to a
2.2.  So apparently I approved by .7 in three screens worth of writing.




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