About the manner in which I tried to convey seemingly increasing complexity
and depth in my writing -- that was the only way I could think to do so
without either actually posting the scene in question (not an option, this
fic isnt finished yet) or blabbing about how much better I thought I was
doing.  I'm pretty sure that nobody wants to hear me start down that path,
so what I'll do is keep this thread in mind, and when I actually do post
Sublimation I'll mention it again and get opinions about it.  For better or
worse, my style has changed :P

Draxonx@bellsouth.net