I've had a couple of requests to repost the first few chapters of my fic, so
here they are.  Chapters 1 - 4 have all been proofread and edited to some
extent, while chapter 5 is in its raw form.

Thanks for reading, and C&C is very appreciated.

Stand tall and shake the Heavens...
- Xenogears

Jonathan Lloyd,
Rune, Master of Confusion and Being Lost in Time
Revenge Wars
http://www.users.fl.net.au/~bcadwgan/rev_end.htm
Korin, Extreemly Confused Seiryuu Seishi
Fushigi Sodan
http://members.xoom.com/MaxiRose/FS.htm
Aishou, Element of Rage
http://www.geocities.com/SiliconValley/Heights/8556/xenogears/aishou.html
Kyouran, Seeker of Power
http://www.geocities.com/SiliconValley/Heights/8556/xenogears/kyouran.htm
Dues ex Machina
http://members.tripod.com/~project_xat/index2.html