Great chapter as always.  Just some minor nits:

On Sun, 17 Jan 1999, Anand Rao wrote:

Ah! My Goddess is owned by Kosuke Fujishima
Ranma 1/2 is owned by Rumiko Takahashi


For the Love of a Mortal
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by Anand Rao

Chapter 4: Demons Don't Dream, They Kill
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"They should be fine.  They two of them together could take on any 
demon, no problem!"  Ranma said nonchalantly.  

	<The> two of them *spelling*

"Are you sure Mousse?"  Ryoga asked.

	sure<,> Mousse? *punctuation*

"Be Silent, Dog!  The situation was well in hand!  You and your foolish 
brother need not have interfered," Kuno spat back.  He was currently 
arguing with two of his colleagues.   One was a man with short black 
hair, wearing malleable tiger-stripped body armor with matching shoulder 
pads.  The other had short blue-black hair on the front of his head and 
brown fur and an extra set of ears on the back.  

	*Is silent supposed to be capitalized?*

"Kami-sama set up the Double System.  Each god was paired up with a 
demon.  If one of the pair died, so did the other.  Kami-sama hoped that 
this would keep us from warring with each other all the time."

	*I think that should be Doublet System. Anyone confirm?*