More comments as promised.

On Sun, 10 Jan 1999, Lara Bartram wrote:

                                BLISS

                                part 5

Mild!?  Well considering who one of authors is, I suppose that she could
have gone much further ^_^

Also, like the minor character traits that are constantly being shown
through in every chapter, from "Akane's" manish mannerisms to her
unconscious dislike to "Ukyo's" talking.

			Bliss 6

Eerie, positively creepy the birth scene.  I think Freemage, Gary, and
others are right about Nabiki-chan :(

			Bliss 7

*shudder* Very nice depictions of the destruction of the island and of the
battle involving the Nerima residents.  Akane was especially IC with her
discovery of Ranma still being alive.

			Bliss 8

The reactions of Ranma and Kuno were very well done.  Man, I never thought
I would ever say this.  I feel sorry for Kuno :(
Add me to the huge list you probably have by now of people that felt they
should have stayed together ^_^

			Bliss 9

I couldn't stop grinning with the cute scene with Nabiki and Nabiki. ^_^
Good chapter on Kuno's recovery and even if she is an ANC, I think he
deserves one after what he went through.

			Epilogue

Great closure on Akane and Kuno and to the story in general.

			Author's notes

Awww, I think a post manga Ranma/Kuno story could work without all those
conditions... er nevermind, give me a few days until I get rid of these
thoughts :(

Anyway great story and was worth the ride even if I didn't seem too
enthusiastic to read it ^_^


Will remember next time to keep my mouth shut on irc.
*looks at the story again*
Nah! ^_^