I had mentioned that I would read and C & C this if she ever wrote it.
D'oh.

On Sat, 9 Jan 1999, Lara Bartram wrote:

                                BLISS

The description of the two amnesiacs were very well done, I felt.  Nice to
see the personalities traits surviving.  If you didn't know who the two
characters were until much later you could still go back to this chapter
and find that it should have been nearly obvious.

			Bliss 2

The last section was hilarious.  Since this was Lara, I kept thinking
that baseball stats would suddenly show up.

			Bliss 3

Surprising that "Akane" didn't name the mountain ugly bastard mountain or
Fierce Dogs Snarling Mountain or some other cheesy name.

			Bliss 4

*Sob* Anyone else find Dog's fate terribly sad :(
Just when he was getting so darned cute.

A few hours of reading and this was the small dent I could put into it.
More comments tomorrow.