Subject: Re: [FFML] [FanFic][SM] Nuke 'Em 'Till They Glow!! Ch.9 (1/5)
From: David Johnston
Date: 1/14/1999, 8:46 PM
To: Benjamin A Oliver
CC: ffml@fanfic.com

"What did they get?!" Urd asked, worried about what sort of
thing could hack into the system... and what it could do with the
information it could find in Yggdrasil.

        The eldest goddess checked. "Just the wish protocols."

        Urd blinked. "Well, it's no big deal, then..."

       "How is it 'no big deal?!'" Sklud called up from the floor.

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Urd is the eldest goddess.  "Skuld"

You are aware, of course that a 500K chapter is in fact 250 to 280 page 
novel?

So, the timestream transported Genma back in time to get him to engage 
Ranma to Pluto?  

>From Chapter 2

"Juraian" sounds better to me.  

>From Chapter 3

Give him credit.  It may be a spoof, but he still manages to give an 
accurate and vivid description of Senshi attacks, including the ones 
which were never shown in the DIC series...

This was very good.  Plot and comedy have both strengthened over
time in this series and he's cribbing a bit less from Monty Python,
now, or perhaps I should say putting more non-Monty Python material
in.