Gee.. Great story!!! I just finnished it but there is one glring error 
that you guys made... just read this expert and I'll explane...

         "For lack of a better name, we're designating them
 as 'Cherubim',"  Ritsuko said.  "They are like Angels, but
 much lesser.  Essentially, we can think of a fifth kingdom
 of life forms, distinct from the ones we are familiar with.
 Both they and the Angels belong to that kingdom of life,
 which is quite distinct from ours, but Angels are much
 greater, in the same way that a human and a termite are part
 of the same Kingdom, but one is more important than the
 other."

Basically there are already 5 kingdoms, so the angels would be in a 
sixth one. Also termites and humans are in different kingdoms (animalea 
and insectes, probibly misspelled....)


 just thought I should point this error out....



                                                     -Pandomine

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