Okay this is the next part that I've decided is worth reading. Unfortunately it is still incomplete. I forgot my idea for the next part and I can't remember where I was going with it. I'm also trying something new. The story jumps from one side to another. What I mean by this is, I wrote one part where I explain what happening, and then I wrote another part that is happening at the same time as the first. I've never done this before, if anyone has any trouble with the flow; just tell me so I can figure out another way to write this.
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Ryoko's torso. The metallic shine of her arm piece was now a dulled, due to the red liquid that gushed upon it. The impacted forced Ryoko into the wall, which was 10 yards behind her. The lady's right blade sunk into Ryoko's flesh just below her collarbone. In so, pinning her to the wall. The other blade was then raised in preparation to relieve Ryoko's head from the rest of her body. She didn't try to fight her off, because at that moment she remembered where she had seen her. The lady's then swung with the force of a guillotine.
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Sasami had just finished picking some radishes. She kneeled down to hand Ryo-Ohki one of the carrots she had picked earlier. She smiled as she said, "Here you go Ryo-Ohki." Surprisingly the little cabbit didn't even look her direction. It was staring forward at the field. Sasami was puzzled by her small friends unusal behavior. "What is it? What are you looking at Ryo-Ohki," said the little princess. She looked down at the cabbit and then toward the direction that it was facing. There was nothing to be seen. Ryo-Ohki fur stood on end, as if it were about to fight. At that moment Sasami saw somthing. She couldn't believe it at first. It appeared as if the air was taking on a human form. In a blink of an eye, the mass of air materialized into a frighten little girl. She was curled up in a ball and had tears in her eyes. Sasami, slowly walked up to her, so that she wouldn't scare her anymore than she already was.
"Hi there. My name is Sasami. Are you alright"
The little girl rubbed her eyes and looked toward Sasami. She then looked toward Ryo-Ohki. "It going to attack me."
Sasami followed the girls eyes down to the still attacked prone cabbit. She picked the little furball up and looked back at the little girl. "Oh, this is just Ryo-Ohki she won't hurt you," said Sasami. She then looked back at the cabbit and said spoke with a little force in her voice, "Isn't that right?! You better be nice or I won't give you another carrot again." Ryo-Ohki's expression fell into a innocent one as she released a surrendering miya. Sasami walked up to the little girl and handed her Ryo-Ohki.
"Here, it's safe to hold her. So what is your name?"
"My name is Cammy"
"What are you doing out here? Are you all by yourself?"
"My sister told me to run, so I did till I ended up here."
"What about your parents? Where are they?"
"My sister Kamil has taken care of me as long as I can remember."
"Why did she tell you to run, and where is she now?"
"She said that we were being followed by something evil. She told me it was the thing that I see in my nightmares." I don't know where she is now. I wish she was here, though."
The little girl looked down at Ryo-Ohki and petted the little cabbit. She started to smile, but she quickly reverted back into a sad expression; as tears formed in her shut eyes. With fear in her voice, she screamed out her sisters name.
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Time seemed to be moving in slow motion as the attacker's blade traveled down torward Ryoko's neck. Still she did not struggle because her mind was seized by the dark images of her life flashing before her eyes. Her expression was pale as she stared at the face that she had seen before. Her thoughts were on the wrong that she had done to the person that now was repaying her back. This ghost from her past.
There was a whistling sound being made by the blade as it cut through the air. It was bearing down on it's target, like an arrow to a bulleye. Just as it made contact with Ryoko's flesh, it and it's wielder had vanished. Now free from the pressure that held her up against the wall, Ryoko feebly fell to her knees. She then laid on the ground as she muttered something out.
"It wasn't my fault.........."
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Sasami walked over to Cammy, in hopes to ease her. She stopped a few feet away from her, because something was begining to materalize behind Cammy's back. Sasami watched as a tall woman formed from thin air. She walked up to Cammy and placed her hand on the little girls shoulder.
"Kamil! I'm so glad your back. What happen to the monster?"
"That's your sister?"
"Uh huh. Hey Kamil this is Sasami, she's my new friend. And this cute bunny thing is Ryo-Ohki"
Cammy, presented the grey-haired cabbit to her big sister. As soon as the two made eye contact, Ryo-Ohki jerked out of Cammy's hands and ran off. Sasami stepped forward after her. "Ryo-Ohki! Where are you going? Wait up," yelled Sasami. She was about to go after her little friend, but she was stopped by Kamil. The young lady placed her hand on top of Sasami's head. There was an ackward quiet as the two stared into each others eyes. After a few seconds passed Kamil began to smile. She had looked into Sasami soul and found it to be kind.
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Unfortunately this is where I'm stuck. I've ran into the eccursed writer's block I was hoping that I could get some feedback that could help direct me from here. I'm sure I had a great idea to connect the next part, but my dog at it along with my homework.
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