So far this story has been a good, interesting and provocative fanfic.
The plot this story is a believable way to pair-up Ranma & Kuno.

Completely erasing people's memories and throwing them into a position
where they are mutually co-dependant can do that sort of thing...  :/

Right now I'm of the opinion that this fic could have been done just
as well without the demon element.  To be fair, though, I'll have to
withhold judgement on that until after I see what new developments pop
up.  Hopefully the demon/cure thing was not used solely as a plot device
to get the two on and off the island.

There are too many demons in Ranma fanfics, and not nearly enough beings
with perfectly spherical eyes.  8)

Otherwise well-written, and I'm always happy not to have to wait for the
next installment of a fanfic.

Still waiting to understand the title,


Doug

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