In retrospect, I prolly shouldn't have posted this right after a
Akaneiichuan thread. You lot are sharper than I figured

Still you've written a fine fic. With a bit more work, this will be a good
whodunit. A few things to note first.

1. As someone else pointed out, why should Colonge help Nabiki cover for
Ranma and Akane? As soon as Nabs says she wants Akanenichuan water, Colonge
should know what's up. Why help Nabiki then? Why risk asking Colonge in the
first place? I think you should find another source for the water.

2. Nabiki took her rabbit up to roof, doused it and tossed it down, just
like that right? That's how you want it to happen? There's one little
problem with that...
I'm sure all the witnesses would have said something about it if Akane had
jumped to her death NAKED! Curses don't come with clothes remember.
Shouldn't be too hard to fix this. I look forward to reading a revised
version.