On Wed, 6 Jan 1999 AlphSailor@aol.com wrote:

    "You know he didn't."  Nabiki sighed.  "Besides, how would he
provoke a pig?  It's not like a pig is going to understand
Japanese.  If I said something to a pig and it bit me, wouldn't it
be reasonable if I got angry at the pig?  And tried to hit it or
something?"

From, it seems that Nabiki's completly unaware of the said fact that Ryoga's
p-Chan. I doubt that Nabiki's THAT clueless as Akane is, especially after 38
volumes, and all these obivious hints dropped. After all, we're talking about
Nabiki here- I'm sure that she would have suspected something by then.

And if she did know, what reason would she have to not reveal Ryoga's
secret?  I doubt Ryoga has the funds to keep her from revealing it.  And I
don't want to think that she knows but just doesn't care that her little
sister is sleeping with someone besides Ranma...

    At its end, he examined both Ranma and Akane, eventually
separating the two by some five feet, at which point the pain was
just really starting to take hold, and re-examining them.  Ranma's
heart tore at the sound of Akane's laboured breathing and
occasional soft whimpers even as he bore the pain stoically.

Feet? Sorry if I'm nit-picking, but since this is Japan we're talking about,
and they use meteric system, not the standard. They'd be measured in meters,
grams, and others like that. You probably should stick to that.
And other thing, isn't five feet awfully too close? In TTF1, when R&A tried
seperating themselves in Akane's room- I'm sure that Akane's room much bigger
than five feet. I'd say around 10 feet wide. A mistake, perhaps?

I think four meters (~12 feet) would be a good distance for when Ranma
first left Akane's room and feel the pain.

    Well, it's been a really long time but I hope you enjoyed the
revised part 2 of The Togetherness Factor.  

Oh yeah, I enjoyed the part two. You have no idea how long i've been waiting
for more of this, ever since I read that incomplete part two. Glad that
you're working again.
Hope part three comes out as quickly as two had.

Hear!  Hear!


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