Subject: Re: [FFML] [sF] Damned Fool [some C&C]
From: PandaTek@aol.com
Date: 1/6/1999, 10:07 AM
To: seraphim@sentex.net
CC: ffml@fanfic.com

In a message dated 1/6/99 10:21:27 AM !!!First Boot!!!, seraphim@sentex.net
writes:

<<  Shouldn't you have posted this as a "Lime"??? >>

I don't think that would have fell under the Lime catagory. For starters,
isn't lime showing a bit of sexuality, kinda like an R or PG13 for showing
sexual content. I think this fix was more of a bearing of soul, or as you
will, a confession of love. I thought it was kewl. I still puzzle though at
who the narrator is, is it Lum? I dunno... even without knowing the anime, I
thought it was beautifully rewritten.... The expression of feelings, etc, etc.
etc....