Subject: Re: [FFML] [sF] Damned Fool [some C&C]
From: "Robyn, Duke of Amber" <seraphim@sentex.net>
Date: 1/6/1999, 11:20 PM
To: PandaTek@aol.com
CC: ffml@fanfic.com



Um....
 Well, that was one joke that fell flat in places....
to make it a bit funnier (I hope) think Saber Marionette J.


On Wed, 6 Jan 1999 PandaTek@aol.com wrote:

In a message dated 1/6/99 10:21:27 AM !!!First Boot!!!, seraphim@sentex.net
writes:

<<  Shouldn't you have posted this as a "Lime"??? >>

I don't think that would have fell under the Lime catagory. For starters,
isn't lime showing a bit of sexuality, kinda like an R or PG13 for showing
sexual content. I think this fix was more of a bearing of soul, or as you
will, a confession of love. I thought it was kewl. I still puzzle though at
who the narrator is, is it Lum? I dunno... even without knowing the anime, I
thought it was beautifully rewritten.... The expression of feelings, etc, etc.
etc....


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