The Lost Lurker sayeth:
So please...if you respect yourself as a writer, if you respect your
potential readers as possibly intelligent human beings, segue subtly into a
flashback. Don't try to bludgeon your reader with the fact that you are
about to cut to a flashback. They know. If they don't know, then they're
stupid, and that's their problem and not yours.
SPEAKING* of which...
I have a similar problem with inane keys like this:
" " spoken
' ' quoted
* * sound
({ }) flatulance
ESPECAILLY the first item. I mean, c'mon! The double (and single) quotes
are _standard delimiters_ of speech (and quoted stuff is simply the quote
that is not used for direct speech).
People, we do have a natural ability to decipher complex syntactic forms.
It is trivially easy to glork the meaning of words and structures from
context. Like there, see? That's why I don't put keys (at least now)
indicating that /* */ indicate thoughts. Its usually clear from context:
/* I should have known better than to trust Gourry to fix the wheel-
barrow! */ thought Lina as she looked upon the broken treasure-transport
device with chagrin.
That was pretty clear, wasn't it?
Still, since there's no standard delimiter for thought, you might feel
justified to make a key for _that_. However, don't say that " " means
speech in the key, because that standard had been laid down
loooooooooooooong ago. So please do not insult the intelligence of thy
readers by telling them that " " means speech, huh?
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