At 09:06 AM 12/21/98 -0700, Shunsuke wrote:

[And one from last week that was missed....]

[Crossovers]
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Title:    Angel's Chronicles Book One:  Angel's Folly
          Chapter 19:  Final Sacrifices
Series: Ranma 1/2, Sailor Moon, Tenchi Muyou!, El Hazard,
          Oh My Goddess!, All-Purpose Cultural Cat-Girl Nuku Nuku,
          Magic Knight Rayearth plus Original Characters
Genre: Crossover, New Character, Action
Author: Nikholas "Radler" F. Toledo
Email: makoto@smarqweb.com, radler@tri-isys.com

Homepage:  http://www.geocities.com/Tokyo/Flats/3145/angelchr.html

Date Sent to FFML:    2315H-2318H 29 Oct 98 (+0800H)
Size: Totalling 206 KB (posted in four parts)

Summary:

Blood flows in the streets of Tokyo, as the forces of
good and evil break open the secrets binding and separating them.
Power erupts and denial is impossible.  The universe itself begins
to converge as God waits for the angels to bear wings and enact the
final movements of mankind.

{Shunsuke}
  Having not read earlier parts of this, I was surprised to find 
  things seemed coherent right from the top; true, I was scratching 
  my head not knowing certain details of what came before, but at 
  least I wasn't left saying "wha?"

  The jumping between fights is nicely timed, letting the reader see 
  a fair bit of each scene, neither staying too long to forget about 
  other events, nor too short that it wasn't worth the time.  The 
  fight scenes are also fairly well done.  Nothing over the top, and 
  nothing beyond the bounds of what the characters normally do with 
  rare exceptions (adding an unused stun weapon to Nuku Nuku isn't a 
  stretch, so it works).

  Also to the author, you might want to check your "reminders" at the
  start; I can see that you're changing names, but the error here 
  causes what you said to make no sense.

	Wipes the sweatdrop from his head... 
	Ehehehehehe... 
	Yeah. I kinda messed up on that one. I _did_ remember reminding people to think of Radler/Tia as the same person. May have been less than direct about that. Suffice to say I'm working on the earlier chapters... the ones that had been all but messed up to begin with. And if anyone cares to know, I'm also doing Chapter 6 of Once and Future Goddess. 
	I'm glad of how the whole battle scene turned out. Better than I had hoped at first. Of course, the cleanup took a month to make.... *shudders* 
	Anyway, glad people liked it. 
	Another thing, I _will_ be posting the FINAL REVISIONS of the entire thing once I wrap up Chapter 20 not to mention the older chapters.... Of course, I still think I would finish Once and Future earlier than this one. ^_^