Subject: [FFML] (no subject)
From: "Dewin Duvae" <duvae@hotmail.com>
Date: 12/22/1998, 1:59 PM
To: ffml@fanfic.com


 - Okonymiaki of truth - 

A Ranma � Fanfic by Dewin
(Who in NO way has any right to use the characters in the story)

Kodachi slowly crept closer. She made a great effort of 
avoiding the leaves that where left on the ground. 
They would crumble noisily under her footsteps, 
howewer catious she could be. She ducked and stretched 
out on the ground when she heard Akanes voice yelling 
about the atroucities that Ranma must have caused. 
Soon things would go flying out the window so Kodachi 
inched over to just below it. Now she could hear excactly 
what was going on inside and it wasn't what she had 
hoped.

"But, but, but..." Ranma's efforts where near neigh. 
<If he'd only come to grips with reality and leave that 
horrible slut.> Kodachi looked out at the path she had 
taken to get to her place. She silently patted her own 
back. It would have been a wonder if they had seen her. 
<Now to make one final effort. If Ranma-sama doesn't 
understand his predicament after this, then he never 
will> She pulled out an okonymiaki from the bag she 
bought, made specifically for food. The okonymiaki was 
an excact replica of the ones the crazy girl with the 
spatula makes, lazed with just the right chemicals for 
what she had planned. She listened in to the 
conversation going on inside the house to judge the 
moment.

"You disgusting pervert! You are just like the rest of 
them aren't you? If I ever let you near me again it'll be too 
soon!" <Akane sounds to calm for this to be a "normal" 
fight> "But I promise you it was an accident. It'll never 
happen again." "Hrm, you're only saying that too calm 
me down" <Not likely, although it would mean that he is 
loosing touch with that insanity you and the pigtailed 
girl have placed him under> "Please Akane, can you 
forgive me?" <WHAT, how could I have been more 
wrong. I must act now ere Ranma-sama will truly be a 
lost soul!> Kodachi placed the okonymiaki on a plate, 
stuck her arm inside the window to put the treat on the 
desk that she knew would be there.

"Hmm, I'm not entirerly sure that I should. You where 
way too forward just then." "Please! I beg, I don't know 
how to make up for it" "I know just the right thing. 
You can taste test one of the okonymiakis I made earlier." 
<This is perfect. She'll try to give him him one of her 
strange concoctions and he'll see the one that I made 
and he'll eat it because it looks edible and then...> 
Kodachi stiffled a squeal of delight, it wouldn't do to be 
noticed before her darling had eaten "his medicine".

"Aaah, eh he he,  maybe I could do something, urm, 
more worthy of attention for you?" "No sily. You don't 
need to excert yourself. Here take this one" "Urm, okay. 
It looks good. It smells good..." Oh, just eat it" 
"-Sigh- Okay." Kodachi held her breath. This was the 
moment she had been waiting for. If the okonymiaki 
looked good enough to eat, then it was the one she had 
made. "I'M ALIVE? And it tasted great? Akane you can 
cook!" "Don't act so surprised. I knew it all along"

<Seven> "But Akane this is a miracle if you can cook 
then anything is possible" <Five> "ARE YOU SAYING 
THAT I NORMALLY CAN'T COOK?" <Tihi, four> 
"Well..." <Three> "...not exactly" <Two> 
"THEN WHAT, EXCACTLY" <One> "Akane I love you" 
<Ze... huh?> Kodachi was heart stricken, if her Ranma 
said that he loved Akane under the effects of the mix 
between truth serums and inhibition repressors, there 
must be at least some feelings to promote the fact.

"Out, get out!" "But Akane I've been sleeping in..." 
Kodachi looked up and saw a shadow pass by her. 
It landed hard on the ground down below. "Akane I'm 
P-chan!" <WHAT!> She jumped down from her position 
and took a closer look at the boy that had been thrown 
out. She noted the green, almost black, pants, the yellow 
shirt, the black spotted bandana. <It's Ryouga> She 
thought happily. < I knew that Ranma-sama would be 
faithful to me> She then bounded of happy and well 
assured that Ranma still loved her.

Although another batch couldn't do any harm, could it?

AUTHORS DEFENSE:
Alright, I was working on what would happen after they 
switched realitys again in Threads and this sort of 
swallowed up a large chunk of it. I never expected it and 
it goes against some plans I have for Kodachi, but I'm 
sending it out as, what? A oneshot fic? Most probably. 
I'll probably never do anything close to this again but...I 
would appreciate some C&C anyway. Especially in 
regards to how you would compare this to Threads 
and/or on my writing style. Y'know, I would appreciate 
anything at this moment about Threads, plot ideas that 
you would like (anything not planned for the characters 
will in all likelyhood be incorporated), MST's, corrections 
on spelling mistakes, mail that says I'm a genius/looser for 
writing such good/crappy work, ANYTHING!


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