To the FFML:
I wished to thank all that sent me C&C on my fic (Starmage) It was
useful, as I took most of it to heart... While a good chunk of it was
Neg. in type, that is the best comments (if I got all "good"
comments.... then how would I improve?) and I will be rewriting the fic
to take that into consideration.

Question for the ones who HAVE read the fic in question (If you haven't
and wish to read the current version go to
http://silver.sdsmt.edu/~atn6581/    and then my fanfiction page.)
Should I drop Ryoko from the story line (as it is, I'm planning a major
rewrite of the overall story line... if you wish full details... email
me and I'll give them to you... A) Please comment.
Andrew
mage2099@dtgnet.com
atn6581@silver.sdsmt.edu
http://silver.sdsmt.edu/~atn6581/
I am on ICQ.