Subject: Re: [FFML] [fanfic][samuraishodown] And Giving Fuji: Prologue
From: "The Eternal Lost Lurker" <EternalLostLurker@worldnet.att.net>
Date: 12/16/1998, 2:31 PM
To: "Sean Connor" <sec@konatsu.ml.org>, "Vincent Diamante" <diamante@gonzaga.org>
CC: "David Johnston" <rgorman@telusplanet.net>, <ffml@fanfic.com>

Good GRIEF, folks...

Arguing over a comma? There's nitpicking, and then there's NITPICKING...

Well, might as well toss in my opinion...

On Wed, Dec 16, 1998 at 01:48:17PM -0500, Vincent Diamante wrote:
On Wed, 16 Dec 1998, Sean Connor wrote:

   She slept until, a fire burned.

No comma after "until".

Yes comma after "until."


NO comma after until. There is no case for it, for ANY reason, even those
given by (I assume) the author in another post.

If there should be a comma in this sentence AT ALL, it should be after
"slept".


---------------------------------------------------------------------------

The Eternal Lost Lurker
Insane evil fanfic writer type nutcase otaku
White Knight of the Knightly Order of Mihoshi Enthusiasts
My bowl runneth over
eternallostlurker@worldnet.att.net
http://www.geocities.com/~etlostlurker
ICQ# 22559724