Hello Mike,

Taking a break from Thomas Aquinas information to read
a fic...

                   What's in a Name?
                           by Michael Noakes

<snip fic>

That, was hilarious.  :)  Perfect response to the messages
of late.

General comments:

An anticipatory silence fell as the crowd strained to hear
the inevitable exchange of words.
    "So," said Ranma.
    "So."
    "What is it this time?"
    "I think you know."
    "My many evils and offences too numerous to mention
against you and Akane?"
    "Yeah."
    A long pause.  Ranma shrugged.

This works for me, however it does seem just a tad ooc
in that Ryoga is too calm.  That may be due to my reading
far more fanfiction than original manga, however...

The fight scene, while short, was well written.  :)   Nice
descriptions.

I'll leave it up to others to figure
out what these misspelling would actually do...

Umm, lessi.

   "Baka Sai Ten-pikachu!"

I could be way off with my Japanese and I've never seen Pok�man
but...

Nothing happened except that a foolish pok�man tripped and fell
upon a sharp, three pronged weapon.  This killed the creature who
floated up to Heaven.

    "Mojo Take-a-bitch-out!"

And across town, Mojo the Pimp opened up his new fast-nude restaurant.

    "Heehee Hack-a-dan!"

As a giggling first-dan blackbelt coughed hard then disgorged a lung.


Er, okay, those sucked but I tried at any rate.

Fun reading, and I'm waiting on Choices.  It's been far too long!



Bleah, back to my essays.

Warren

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