Ami 3:      The same WOULD happen to you.
Ami 5:      Because SHE wills it to.
Makoto:     What are you talking about?

Makoto:     Minako?  Are you trying to tell me that Minako is behind 
           all of this?
Ami 9:      Does she have a name?  She who does not exist....
Ami 2:      Behold, even now, she watches you.

The 2nd Ami points to the ceiling, and Makoto looks up.  There, she 
sees a pair of eyes.  For a moment, they seem familiar, like 
Minako's eyes, but they vanish in an instant.

What? Is that a glimmering of a plot I sense...?

Nah, couldn't be. Maybe I'm reading too much into this fic (which is 

kind 

of a worrying thought by itself ^_~ )

Having been on this roller-coaster from the beginning, and as one of 
DDFA's semi-regular critiquers, I think you may be right, Lorren--this 
does seem to imply... something... is actually happening.  If it weren't 
for the hedghog at the end, the whole Ami/Ami/Ami...Ami/Makoto scene 
would be... downright straightforward.

indeed..  the hedgehog even seemed rather contrived.

  I think Mark may have just been using this set-up to clear out all the 
weenies before moving on to the plot.  Maybe he figures any of us that 
are left are now commited to the storyline, so he can send us anywhere 
he wants.
  The scary part is, he may be right....

--Freemage,
   Who's bringing along his galloshes and umbrella, just in case....

I'm stuck for the ride..  I read the first few, laughed, and went on. now
I'm looking forward to each individual episode. 

I would like to see Mokona's love interest in Usagi become fulfilled,
though.

and me? I'm bringning my towel!

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Nick Casler      IAI Tech Support      ncasler@alaska.net
    "If you wanna assign stereotypes, I'm an 8-track"
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