Ranma's Father 

The Start of the Knightmare...
Part 2

	Very nice, Jessica. Well done so far. I noted a few small errors, such 

as

'idilic' (which should be idyllic, I believe), but it's an excellent 

start

to the second chapter. You've taken this idea and really ran with it. 

	Humor, drama and adventure all in one. *grin* I look forward to a 

possible

scene where one of Batman's enemies discovers Ranma's little 'problem' 

and

proceeds to laugh so hard, Bruce is able to capture them with no effort 

at

all. Heh heh...

	Looking forward to more..

	Ed Becerra

	"Dreamers may die, but the Dream is eternal.."

Heh .... you think that's bad ?  Imagine..... 

Ranma .... 

Catwoman ...

Nuff said !!!






>From the twisted mind of Lord Darkwolf "LD" for short just 
don't call me Darky


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