Very nice, Jessica. Well done so far. I noted a few small errors, such 

as

'idilic' (which should be idyllic, I believe), but it's an excellent 

start

to the second chapter. You've taken this idea and really ran with it. 

Thanks, nice pun by the way.  I see where Hitomi gets the ideas for 
them.

	Humor, drama and adventure all in one. *grin* I look forward to a 

possible

scene where one of Batman's enemies discovers Ranma's little 'problem' 

and

proceeds to laugh so hard, Bruce is able to capture them with no effort 

at

all. Heh heh...

Hitomi also suggested that, but I'm thinking of something else.


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