At 02:08 PM 12/8/98 PST, Jessica Samolson wrote:

Since everyone is asking, here is what I have.  It's already gone 
through three revisions, and the scene with Nodoka is all thanks to 
Hitomi.

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Ranma's Father 

The Start of the Knightmare...
Part 2

	Very nice, Jessica. Well done so far. I noted a few small errors, such as
'idilic' (which should be idyllic, I believe), but it's an excellent start
to the second chapter. You've taken this idea and really ran with it. 

	Humor, drama and adventure all in one. *grin* I look forward to a possible
scene where one of Batman's enemies discovers Ranma's little 'problem' and
proceeds to laugh so hard, Bruce is able to capture them with no effort at
all. Heh heh...

	Looking forward to more..

	Ed Becerra

	"Dreamers may die, but the Dream is eternal.."