<A Quick MSTing by A-kun and friends>

A-kun: Okay, if you have any replies to make about this, send comments 
to: akun15@hotmail.com  And since I'm still messing around with my 
stories, I'll just have to summon some random friends to help me MST 
this.  Helper #1!

Tifa Lockheart: Huh?  Where am I- oh, hi A-kun.

A-kun: Hey, Tifa.  Okay, Helper #2!

Genma: What the hell?

A-kun: Genma, just get ready to MST.

Genma: Um, what do we do?

A-kun: We comment or make fun of the story.  Now, the final Helper!

Chu-Chu: Chu!

A-kun: Great to see you, Chu-Chu.  For those who don't quite know any of 
these characters, Tifa Lockheart is from Final Fantasy 7, Genma Saotome 
is from Ranma 1/2 and Chu-Chu here is from Revolutionary Girl Utena!  I 
claim no ownership over the story we're MSTing or these characters.  And 
remember, I belong to Kelloggs.

Tifa: How did THAT happen?

A-kun: TharzZzDunN sold me for some quick cash and the rights to Jupiter 
(the planet, not the senshi, yet).

Date: Mon, 30 Nov 1998 11:21:57 -0900 (AKST)
From: Myrriden <sm39316@chs.mat-su.k12.ak.us>
Subject: [ffml][fanfic][ff7]Such a Change

Genma: [John Cleese] And now, for something completely different.

 This is the first part of an idea I'm currently working on.  The next
part will be an attachment in HTML so that the italics and other nifty
little changes come through.

All (save Chu-Chu): [blink] [o_o] Huh?

 Basically this came to me as an idea of 'what if' Vincent didn't get
shot by Hojo?  What if he killed Hojo that early, and decided to raise
Sephiroth?

A-kun: Then why didn't he do it SOONER?

 I'm probably going tack on a few more short chapters like this before 

I

quit, because I heart simply isn't in FF7 stories.  If, however, 

someone

is willing to finish it in the guidelines I will set, then they're 

welcome

to.
 This is rather rough, so take heed!

Chu-Chu: Chu-chu chu chu chu chu chu chu-chu chu!

	[The others burst out laughing.]

---------------
Final Fantasy VII; Such a change

Tifa: You know, I look at that title and I keep waiting for Myrriden to 
finish it.

By myrriden
--------------
Chapter 1

	The light flared in his eyes, making him blink. "Lucrecia?" 

Genma: Bless you.

Tifa: [Bapping Genma] That's her NAME.

Genma: Oh!  Sorry.

	"Right here," she whispered, kissing his cheek. He held her close.
"Well, now, Vincent! This tells me something I'd rather hear from those
lovely lips of yours." 

Chu-Chu: Chu-chu chu-chu-chu chuuu!

Tifa: [lightly bapping Chu-Chu] Get your head out of the gutter, 
Chu-Chu.

	"I love you, woman," he grunted. "Will you be mine?" 

A-kun: That sounds more like Cid talking, not Vincent.

	"Always and forever." she broke the embrace, and bounced off the
bed.

Genma: Boingy-boingy-boingy!

"I have to get to the lab early, Vincent. Hojo came up with another
experiment from Professor Gast's work. He asked me to help him." 

A-kun: [Lucrecia checking her shotgun] And I'ma aimin' 'o finish this 
little sure-aid.

	"Alright." Vincent too, slid out of bed, grabbing his blue pants.

[Suddenly the doorknob starts rattling.  Vincent in a panic, leaps out 
of the window as Lucrecia tosses on a pair of underwear and a shirt.  
Hojo enters.]

Tifa: [Lucrecia] Hojo!  You scared me!

Genma: [Hojo] Why are you wearing Taz Boxers and a Turk shirt?

Tifa: [Lucrecia] Oh, I was feeling masculine today...

Chu-Chu: [crossing his arms] CHUUUU chu chu-chu chu?

Tifa: How is it that we can understand Chu-Chu?

	[A-kun shrugs.]

"Mary asked me to train some of the new Turk recruits. She doesn't have
much faith in that young fool Tseng. It's about time, too.

A-kun: Yeah!  She shouldn't have faith in ANYONE!!

He's still
searching for Gast and that Ancient." 

Genma: [Vincent] That loser couldn't find Gast if he passed it!

Tifa: That's Proffessor GAST, not Professor GAS!

	Lucrecia sighed, "Why don't they forget about them? We have enough
information from Gast's work.

Chu-Chu: [Number 5] Chu chu-chu.

Tifa: I wonder how many people saw the movie "Short Circuit".

What more can we learn from those poor
souls?" 

A-kun: [Lucrecia] Come on, let's stop picking on my co-workers!  Hojo 
may be completely unfit to do anything. scientific or otherwise, but 
let's at least stop running him up the flagpole.

	Vincent snarled, "You mark my words, love. Hojo is searching for
power, only. He doesn't care who it kills as long as it makes him 

famous.

Tifa: He did seem quite unproffessional in his research.  He also seemed 
to be just as surprised as everyone else when things happened.  Things 
moved, people breathed in and out, trees break wind, cats meow, dogs 
bark, Sephiroth becomes the son of Evil...

He'd kill those two, or subject them to horrible tests. Personally I'd
die." 
	"Silly. I'm sure Hojo knows what he's doing. He's a sweetheart to
the rest of us." 

Genma: This Hojo sounds like an extremely unbalanced person considering 
the two different sides that Lucrecia and Vincent are discussing.

Chu-Chu: Chu chu-chu.

	"That's because he feels you are of his own species," Vincent
growled. "You know how he feels about you and I!" 

Genma: [Vincent] Why, the man ate nine cans of beans and stood outside 
our room all of last night!  He's just not mentally balanced!

	Lucrecia bent over, and gave him a kiss. "I'll be back soon,
Vincent." 
	Mary swept her black hair back behind the nape of her neck.

A-kun: WHOA!  She was in the room TOO!?

"Well,
here are the new recruites. Killjoy Rude, Adrianna Morians, Bill 

Archer,

and 'Slim' James Hoople." 

Tifa: Killjoy?!  [Tifa begins snickering, then bursts out laughing.]

Rude: [enters] ............. It's not funny. [leaves]

Chu-Chu: Chu-chu-chu chu chu, chu?

Genma: Yeah, what _is_ the deal, Tifa?

A-kun: Even I'm mystified.

	"Damn, Mary," Vincent groaned. "They're a bunch of kids! Hey..."
he pointed at Rude, "How old are you?" 

A-kun: [Rude] 
...........................................................................

Rude: [enters] ....... that's not funny either.

Genma: So, how do we know he's not just muttering under his breath?

	"23, sir. he replied. 
	"What weapons training do you have?" 
	"Extensive training in all materia types, weapon drills in
projectile weapons." 

A-kun: Unusual, considering he uses a boxing style.

	Vincent glanced at his registry, "You have a child?" 

A-kun and Tifa: [O_O] HE HAS A KID?!!?

Genma: Why is this surprising?

Tifa: Well, I guess we really don't know all that much about the Turks, 
but... well, the way he and Reno usually talk... okay, Reno more that 
Rude, well, you just don't get the picture of a married man!

	"Yes, sir. I'm training him to join Soldier." 

Genma: What's the difference between the Soldiers and Turks?

Tifa: First of all, that's SOLDIER.  Secondly, there are four divisions 
of fighters in Shinra.  The Mecha or automated defenses, the ordinary 
fighters, the Turks (who are like elite spies/martial artists) and 
SOLDIERs who are humans who have been injected with Jenova's Cells and 
then exposed to Mako Energy.

	"Good for him." Mary interupted, "Anyway, my young friends, you're
about to try and join the Turks, a _very_ exclusive company working for
Shinra as the 'protectors'.

A-kun: And spies and thieves and backstabbers and killers and... need I 
go on?

As a norm, we are the best Shinra have to
offer. You'll all be trained and tested for some period, maybe even 

coming

with us at times. 

A-kun: Note, that last sentence feels wrong.  Maybe "Maybe even joining 
us on missions occasionally."  Otherwise, the hentais will laugh at that 
line.

	'But the Turks only employ four at a time, so only one to two of
you will be able to join. We'll be waiting for Korrie to arrive. You 

will

adress the three of us as sir, or ma'am respectivly. Anything to say,
Valentine?" 
	"Of course," he grunted. "Listen to her kids.

TharzZzDunN: Listen to her kids?!  Dammit all, I knew this company was 
being run by a bunch of full-diapered snotnosed cry babies!!  Now let's 
go burn Microsoft down to the ground!!  [Joins a horde of disgruntled 
small business owners who set off with torches and pitchforks, to kill 
Dr. FrankenGates '98.]

The rest of us
Turks, except possibly Tseng, will probably go easier on you than her. 

She

lost her maternal instinct a long time ago," Mary flashed a cruel 

smile,

A-kun: [Bill Archer] Yes, sir.  Wetting 'em now.

"But I'm a real sweetheart." The recruits looked at the imposing figure
dressed in the customary blue suit with something bordering on 

disbeleif.

He looked even more cold than an iceberg, and twice as treacherous.
Compared to him, a blood crazy doberman seemed a pleasant thought. "One
more thing. None of us lie. We have no reason to.

Tifa: That's one of the things I liked about them.

We tell you something,
you had better listen and heed it. Other than that, we should get along
beautifully." 

Tifa: Thanks!  Oh, you mean 'get along beautifully'.  Shoot.  And here I 
thought it was a compliment.

A-kun: I think you're beautiful.

Tifa: Yeah, you and half of the Hentai Kingdom.

A-kun: Actually, as prominent as your 'talents' are, I do actually care 
more about the fact that you A) know martial arts, B) have an 
independent spirit, C) are quite intelligent, and D) are really a good 
mix of tough and nice.

TharzZzDunN: Plus she's at least a nine on the 'Schwing-o-meter'!  Tent 
pole!

	He turned his back, and ambled of.

Chu-Chu: Chu chu-chu chu-chu chu chu chu chu!

A-kun: Yeah, that should be 'ambled off.'

Rude to the opportunity to ask
Mary, "Ma'am, I may be speaking out of turn, but may I say something?" 
	"Go ahead." 

Tifa: [Mary] You won't speak much otherwise.

	"He scares me much more than anything I have ever seen." 
	"Good." Mary smiled, giving the poor recruits the impression of a
field full of rabid tigersharks. 

Genma: I know Tigersharks actually exist, but I can't help getting the 
image of some sort of weird cross between a cat and a shark.  
meow-ROOOOOARRRRR!

	Vincent stretched his arms, focusing all mental energies through
the muscles, feeling them untense, eager for movement. 
	Years ago, he had been the best hinra

Tifa: 'Shinra', not 'hinra'.

had to offer, single
handedly saving some idiotic pilot and his wife from a burning plane
singlehandedly.

Chu: Chu chu chu.

A-kun: It's the author's version of them, Chu-chu.

After several more feats that amazed Shinra, he was
drafted into the Turks, and joined almost immediatly when one of the
leaders died on mysterious circumstances. 

Genma: [Vincent, glancing left and right] Yeah, that's the ticket, 
yeah...

	Vincent was charged for the murder, but several testimonies stated
he never lied, and the true murderer was discovered, thanks to 

Vincent's

own discovery. He joined immediatly, and set about making the Turks the
most feared company on the planet,

Tifa: [;;^.^;;] Anooooo, the Turks are a group, not a company.

easily overcoming the newly emerging
Soldier corps, people showered with Mako energy. 

Tifa: [;;;^.^;;;] Not to nitpick, but SOLDIER is always capitalized.

	He'd been hard put as leader of the Turks until Mary and Korrie,
two friends from his old days, joined. Korrie had been his old 

girlfriend,

but after a marriage to another man and three kids, all of whom but one
died, she was ready

A-kun: [;;;;O_O;;;;] to admit that Vincent wasn't going to give up, 
apparently....

Tifa: [sweating profusely] Vincent seemed rather cold, but I never 
expected THAT!

Genma: Hmmm, perhaps if the Author put in some more detail about what 
actually happen to said family.

for a new career. Mary joined simply because Vincent
was a legend in her hometown, and she was determined to become just as
famous as him. 

Genma: And boy, did she earn the name 'Queen of Blowj-'

A-kun: Genma, kids might be reading.

Genma: ... uh, ahem, I bet she earned it in a respectable manner.

	Korrie took time off to care for her son, but Mary stayed by his
side, making overtures of friendship. The truth of the matter was, 

Vincent

absolutely scared her. She knew nothing could stop him if one day he
decided to kill her. 

All (save Chu-Chu): [;;;;;;;^.^;;;;;;;] Anooooo....

A-kun: Is it the other way around or what?

Genma: Did you stupidly promise that your son would grow up to be a man 
among men, then dragged him off to a cursed training ground in China 
too?

	Then Korrie recruited Tseng, a man who knew almost nothing of war,
but learned quickly. He and Vincent disliked each other due to Tseng's
lust for power, but recent years had tempered his wanting into a
simplistic desire to be the best at his job. He knew he could never
replace Vincent, who was just too good. 

A-kun: ..... I know I should making a comment because that paragraph 
seems a bit disjointed somehow.

	Vincent never liked killing. He did it simply because it was his
job, but he took no pleasure. That was the simple reason Mary and Tseng
never gained his friendship. They enjoyed their work, even the killing.

A-kun: [raising his bloody scythe] Of course, why do a job if you don't 
like it?  Unless it's a temp job.

Korrie just considered it a way to pay bills, and as she had no intrest 

in

him anymore, he was willing to become her friend.

Genma: Um.... couldn't you just become a doctor or something?

Tifa: Maybe it's all she's good at.

She shared her worries
and secrets with him, and he always gave excellent advice. 
	But he scared her. Vincent was so cold, always so cold and
distant.

Tifa: Actually, from what he told us of his past, I got the impression 
he was more emotional then he was when we were adventuring.

When you spoke, he gave you the feeling your words were being
anylyzed and memorized for future use.

Chu-Chu: Chu chu, chu-chu-chu chu-chu chu chu chu-chu chu chu-chu-chu.

Tifa: [bapping Chu-Chu] I thought I told you to keep your mind out of 
the gutter.

But she cared about him, and
trusted him absolutely. 

Genma: [evil voice] Fool, BWAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAA!

Tifa: Genma, you do that too well.

	A sudden snap of his wrist against the wooden dummy shattered it.

Tifa: [Vincent] AAAAAAAAAAAAAAIIIIIIIIIIIEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!

Sighing, Vincent set up another, wanting to return to his memories. 

Tifa: [Vincent] Dammit, I wish I had listened to my mom when she told me 
that milk built strong bones.  Now, even Dan Hibiki could kick my ass!

Genma: So, he's set up another wrist?  The hell?

A-kun: Ah, the Frankenstein approach to restoring limbs.

	Everybody was so scared of him.

Genma: BOOGA-BOOGA-BOOGA!

Always around people frightened by
his coldness.

A-kun: [Vincent] I'm cold?  Maybe if I put down these buckets of Dry 
Ice....

It really wasn't his fault.

Tifa: [Ryouga Hibiki] RANMA!!!  THIS IS ALL YOUR FAULT!!!

Genma: You've seen Ranma 1/2?

Tifa: Are you kidding?  We have the complete manga series, both movies, 
all the OVAs and the first TV season in every room in the Highwind.

He had emotions, and felt
empathy for Korrie's problems. For this reason only did he try to help
her. 

Tifa: [Vincent] Yeah, otherwise, I just couldn't stand that [normal] oh, 
wait, Korrie isn't Scarlet.

	Then she introduced him to Lucrecia, the most beautiful woman he
had ever seen.

Genma: Once he managed to get that turkey off her head...

Her soul, unlike other people, was so pure.

A-kun: [Vincent] Compared to the scum that's on this planet, Lucrecia is 
the Goddess of Purity.

Clean of the
influence of the outside world. From the start, Vincent loved her. 

Genma: Even though she was confused on the concept of a pen and paper.

	Her eyes, a glorious green that shined with a energy of pure
goodness, of the planets holiness.

Tifa: HEY!  That's Aeris's schtick!

She walked with complete grace, her
stiff Shinra design smock seeming to come alive under its own power to
carress her. 

Genma: [Vincent] After it nearly strangled me to death for the ninth 
time, I had to shoot the damn thing.

	It was not long that she submitted to his charms, perhaps seeing
how lonely he was. She was never scared of him. Never afraid he might 

snap

and kill her. Never afraid. She was his dream. 

A-kun: [Vincent] She was also more naive than Mihoshi, Gourry, Amelia, 
Ryouga, Ranma and Kasumi combined.  But at the sex was _FANTASTIC_!!!

	"Hey, man." A voice interupted his thoughts, "Sir, I mean. Sorry
'bout that. Dude, do you like know martial arts and all that?" Vincent
turned to see 'Slim' standing in the doorway.

Genma: [Slim] HOOOOOOCCCKKKKK, P-TOOIE!

Tifa: [Slim] You know them Mar-shi Arts?

A-kun: [Boomhower, from King of the Hill] 
Thatding-dangole'internetislikeding-dangole'clickclickclickclickandnakedchickseverywhereman.

"I'm asking 'cause I'm from
Wutai. My poppa taught me martial arts when I was a kid, y'know. My bro
took to it more, but he's destined to be the leader or some shit o' 

Wutai. 

	'Poppa wern't to pleased when I joined Shinra, but he didn't argue
much wit' me. But, do ya know martial arts?" 

Tifa: [Slim] Yeah, what wit' dat ding-dang ole' war goin' on between 
Wutai and the heartless, blood-sucking Shinra, I thought it would do the 
family some good to go off and join the Turks, 'cause they're so upright 
and not affliated with Shinra, y'know?

	Vincent nodded, "I've studied it." 
	"Wanna spar?" 

A-kun: No discussion of what kind of martial arts, the forms of weapons 
and such, they just go at it, huh?

Tifa: [sarcastically] Of course.  It all depends on what belt you made.

Chu-Chu: Chu, chu chu chu-chu chu chu-chu-chu.

	Rude smiled at the picture of his son, Reno leaned on his
shoulder. "Man. Your kid's cute. Think he'll be bald like you?" 
	"Hmm. I don't know. My dad says baldness is hereditary, and I lost
all my hair when I was seven. Maybe." 
	"Hah. My kid's got this bright red-brown hair. Musta got it from
his mom." Reno pointed at his dark brown locks in emphasis. "How 'bout
you, Morians? Archer?" 

A-kun: [O_O] Now Reno's gotta a kid?!

Tifa: [;;;;^_^;;;;] I'm sure his dirty slacker look appeals to someone.

A-kun: But he can't be more than 24 when the game starts!  Not to 
mention he and Rude are always on duty, when would they have the chance 
to get married?!

Genma: I hate to say this, being a man who has never cheated on my wife 
despite my shady dealings concerning my son, but they've probably had 
more than a few run-ins with prostitutes.

	"I don't have any children, Reno." Archer smiled, "Though I have a
girl I plan to have a future with."
	"Shaddup, Archer," Adrianna giggled as his hand slid up her leg.
"Turks can't date each other."
	"Where does it say that," Archer asked.

Tifa: [holding up a Turks Manual] Nowhere.

A-kun: How'd you get that?

Tifa: I asked Elena for one back in her naive days and she just gave to 
me.

A-kun: And what do you mean by 'Back in her naive days'.  I thought she 
was still kind of naive up to the end.

	"Good God, Slim! What happened?"

A-kun: [Slim] What *HIC* does it look like?

Tifa: [Archer] It looks like you just spent the whole night at a biker 
bar, insulting everyone who passed.

A-kun: [Slim] Then that's what I *HIC* did. *THUD*

	Everyone turned at Reno's statement to see Slim standing against
the door, grin still present, but faded amidst the bruises. His arm was 

in

a splint, and a tattered bandanna held his leg straight. 
	"Damn, guys," Slim grinned, "Never ask Valentine for a fight.
He'll kick ya ass. Then I was stupid enough to ask him to train me a 

bit

in off time." 

Tifa: What are you guys talking about?  He and I sparred and I kicked 
his ass.

A-kun: Did you use a Limit Break?

Tifa: Just 'Dolphin Blow' and 'Final Heaven'.

A-kun: Tifa-chan, that would stomp more fighters.

	"He beat the shit out of you?" 
	"Over-estimated me," Slim corrected. "'Cause I stood up so well in
the fight. But that was the level o' my endurance. Once he started to
train me, I collapsed, and sprained my knee. Lucky he had an Elixer on
hand." 

Genma: I've played enough video games to know that's spelled 'Elixir'.  
And that they restore Magic Points, not Hit Points.

Tifa: Yeah, that's like bandaging a broken pinky before taking care of a 
grievious wound.

Chu-Chu: Chu!

	"Man," Reno whistled. 
	"Damn straight," Rude blinked. "That Valentine fella gives me the
creeps. He's so scary...and cold! He reminds me of a vampire or 
something." 
	"Or something," Adrianna shuddered. 

Genma: Or etc.

Tifa: Or other.

A-kun: Or Miscellanious.

Chu-chu: Chu chu-chu-chu.

	Slim grinned, "Oh well." 

Tifa: At least he has a good attitude about it.

	Vincent laid full on the bed,

A-kun: How about 'spread-eagle' or 'laid back'.  'laid full' gives me a 
perverted thought.

a small smug smile spread across his
face. Lucrecia was due anytime now. The wine was ready, the ring 

shined,

the minister locked up, a bit angry, but ready to tie Vincent's and
Lucrecia's knot. 

Genma: [Minister] MMMMMM-mmm-m-m-mmmm-mmmm-mmmmm-mmmmmmmmmmmm mmmm mmmm 
mm mmmmmmmm mmmm m m m!

A-kun: [Vincent] No.

Genma: [Minister] MM MMMM MMMMMM MMMMMMMMMMM!!

A-kun: [Vincent] That's quite a mouth you've got, Father.

	In fact, he smiled as he heard the door open and close softly,
there she was. 

A-kun: [Vincent] GYAAAH!  Don't do that!

Chu-chu: Chu chu chu?

Genma: I agree, Chu-chu, where was she?

	Lucrecia paused at the doorway, "Vincent?" 
	Her voice was so sad. What happened? "Yes, my love?" 
	"I need to talk to you." Instantly he was off the bed, holding her
hands. 

Tifa: [Lucrecia] DON'T _DO_ THAT!

	"What is it? Are you hurt?" 
	"No," she smiled weakly. "I'm fine, Vincent. But...I have news for
you...you won't like, I'm sure of it." 
	"What is it?" 

Tifa: [Lucrecia] Well, it seems those constant wedgies have been making 
Hojo stronger and, well, I'm not sure I'm doing enough damage.  Could 
you please help us?

	"I'm pregnant," she whispered. 
	He reared back, surprised, but smiled fondly, "Why would I..." 
	"It isn't yours, Vincent. I...didn't cheat on you...it's an
experiment." 

Genma: So, you cheated on him for an experiment.

	He sat on the bed. 
	"Hojo...said that I was the only one...

Tifa: And she didn't even think that maybe they should get a volunteer?

he discovered Jenova cells
made people stronger. He said he needed someone intellegent and strong
enough to bare the child...I accepted it, Vincent. I need to do this
Vincent...if it works...the strongest child..." her eyes were filled 

with

tears. "I'm sorry...I should have asked, but I was so excited! The
chance..." 

Chu-chu: Chuuuu, chu chu-chu-chu chu-chu chu-chu?

Tifa: You're right Chu-chu, I don't see her as a power-hungry woman.  
Even for a strong kid, most women would usually prefer having their kid 
with a mentally stable person.  Not to mention usually having the kid's 
father be someone they actually like.

	"I..." 
	She collapsed in a chair, "I didn't realize until it was to late
what it would do to you, Vincent. I was so greedy, I didn't think of 

you." 

Genma: Actually, why did it have to be so split-second?  Why not wait 
until you could talk it over with Vincent?

A-kun: In the original story, it made more sense because Lucrecia fell 
for Hojo, who was supposedly more mentally stable back then.  Vincent 
made a vow to let her be happy, so long as Hojo didn't do something 
outrageously dangerous.

	This irked him, "Never, Lucrecia! Never could you be greedy. But
the chance to be a mother was too strong." She was so surprised, she
didn't see the tears on his down-turned face. "I...I love you, 

Lucrecia. I

wouldn't stop you even if I could." 
	"Vincent...I'm so sorry..." 
	"Promise me, though, in nine months you will be mine, and mine
alone." 
	"I..." 
	"Promise?" He looked at her, showing her the tears. 
	"I...can't, Vincent! What about my child?" 

A-kun: Hojo may be nuts, but even he wouldn't take on Vincent.

	He turned away, "If it must be that way, Lucrecia...I won't be
greedy...I can share you with someone who needs you. But...as long as 

you

will be my wife...I will gladly accept whatever the fates throw at me." 
	Lucrecia came over and hugged him tightly. "I...love you,
Vincent..." 

Genma: Hey, it just occured to me.  What about the fact that Hojo hasn't 
even tested these cells on other creatures first?  And why a fellow 
scientist as the first test subject?  And why does Hojo have to be the 
father?  Surely there's a couple in Shinra who would be willing to have 
a child for the experiment.

A-kun: Like I said, in the original story, it made more sense.  But, not 
bad.

		End of Chapter 1


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A-kun: Not bad, Myrriden, but it needs some refinement.  But, I would 
like to see how different the future of this world will be like.

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