| Subject: Re: [FFML][ranma][ff]little orphan kasumi 1b |
| From: David Johnston |
| Date: 12/6/1998, 6:19 PM |
| To: David Johnston |
| CC: metroanime@mindspring.com, FFML@fanfic.com |
Frankly I have difficult seeing Kasumi and Ranma fall in love without a change that gives him greater maturity. You've written Ranma as a little boy, and Kasumi's a prematurely mature woman. What, is Kasumi going to be Ranma's mother for the rest of his life? Even if she'd go for it, I don't think Ranma would. You're right, of course, this change does take Akane out of the picture. But it made Shampoo a much more credible competitor, and Ukyo's still available.