Subject: Re: [FFML] [4 of 4][Ranma][Fanfic] Waters Under Earth - Chapter 30
From: "Alan Harnum" <harnums@hotmail.com>
Date: 12/6/1998, 3:22 PM
To: betrayal@matnet.com
CC: ffml@fanfic.com

*SPOILER WARNING*















    Then darkness, falling, sweeping down over him, numbing and
welcoming, taking away everything, covering it all.
Oh my god! you killed Genma! YOU BASTARD!

You're the second person to make this joke, or a variation thereof.  ;)

in all seriousness, this moves the plot along a bit faster than we are 
used
to, in this partic-yoo-lar series..  

WUE goes into overdrive.  ;)

but it's excellent!  I'm a touch confused about the joketsuzoku 
subplot,
though..   how did the Amazon ladies figure out about the spies?!?

Presumably they put it together from what Shampoo told them.  At the 
very least, Fang Shi could have been informed by the Serpent about the 
Phoenix Tribe's habit of using Jusenkyou to go among humans.

Thanks for the comments.

Ciao,
-Alan Harnum

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