I need help. I am a first time fanfic writer, and I need the help of any
and all Ranma 1/2 fan fic writers. I have just recently started writting
stories based on other topics (besides original stories) and I need some
one who can go over part 1 of my first Ranma 1/2 FanFic (titled Ranma-The
Manji Itokos series: The Reality Crystal) and tell me what I need to
change, leave as is, and send me C&C all togather. (So you know, I have the
most trouble with general slapstick comedy) I can�t do this without help.

Please send a private reply to: epnett@etex.net  if you can help.

Thanks,

James Epnett