Subject: [FFML] [Orig] Okaeri, Kaori-chan! -- Episode 01
From: Matt Johnston
Date: 12/1/1998, 6:16 PM
To: ffml@fanfic.com
CC: James Nutley <jnutley@acadia.net>

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...Satoru answered the phone before the first ring ended.
     "He... hello?"  The voice at the other end was too familiar.
     "Kaori?"
     "Satoru?"
     "It's me.  What's wrong?"
     "Can you... Can you pick me up at the airport?"
     "Which one?"
     "Haneda.  Please hurry."
     "Sure.  I'll be there in a minute."


It was a dark night in November when Satoru Nobata received the 
phone call that would change his life.  Kaori was back from 
America, and waiting for *him*.

But something was not right about her return.

And finding out what brought Kaori back would either bring them 
together as one, or create a rift between them too wide to ever 
close...

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               O K A E R I,   K A O R I - C H A N !

                            Episode 01
           Kaori's Good-bye: "I Will Return Someday..."

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         "Okaeri, Kaori-chan!" (c) 1998 Matthew Johnston.
                       All Rights Reserved.

  This is a work of fiction.  Any resemblance of the characters
     to any persons, living or dead, is purely coincidental.  

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"Like the time I ran away
 And turned around
 And you were standing close to me"
                    --Jon Anderson, "Awaken"

Saturday, March 29, 1997
3:12 PM.

     "C'mon, Satoru!  Hurry up!"  Kaori Akazawa grinned as she ran 
kitty-corner across the street, leaving Satoru Nobata behind to 
try and keep up.  Satoru knew it was impossible to catch her.  He 
also knew that, eventually, she'd let him.  It was nothing new; 
she'd slow to a jog, and he'd tag her on the shoulder.  Then he'd 
collapse in the street.
     After a chase down two blocks of city sidewalk, he did just 
that.  In that order.  Kaori smiled triumphantly as she caught her 
breath; Satoru was concentrating too hard on the burning in his 
lungs to smile.
     "So, where to now?"  Kaori stood over Satoru, who coughed 
from his sitting position.  She seemed as if she must be much 
taller than him, even though he knew she was a good six or seven 
centimeters shorter than his 175 cm.  Satoru mused that his extra 
weight kept him from looking as tall as he should.
     Kaori sighed and sat next to him on the curb.  "You really 
shouldn't over-exert yourself like that."  She shook her finger 
and frowned pointedly at Satoru.
     Satoru shot her an incredulous look and coughed what he had 
intended to be a laugh.  "Next you'll be saying I brought this all 
on myself."
     "Well, you did."  Kaori's frown was breaking at the corners 
of her mouth.  "You shouldn't break a girl's heart like that."
     "All I did was correct your math, or whatever you call those 
weird random scribblings of yours.  And didn't my math give you a 
higher score?"
     "That's not the point!"  Kaori furrowed her brow to keep from 
smiling.  "You left me with no choice in the matter."  She lifted 
her chin piously.  "Besides, your punishment was fair and 
inevitable."  The solemn expression faded away when Satoru 
chuckled.
     "Uh-huh.  And you didn't enjoy administering my punishment?"
     "Of course not!"  Her face tried to hide a smile, but failed 
after a short struggle.  "You dare accuse me of taking pleasure in 
your penance?"
     "Oh, *no*.  I'd *never* do that."  Satoru sighed as he rose 
to his feet.  "And this is the *last* time I go running after 
you."  He offered Kaori a hand and tried to look serious.
     Kaori grinned lopsidedly.  "How many times have I heard 
*that* before?"  A lock of red hair fell as she took his hand.  
Once on her feet, she smoothed it back behind her ears with 
slender fingers.
     "So," Satoru returned Kaori's grin.  "Where are we off to, 
anyway?"
      Kaori threw back her head and looked at the top of the 
horizon of buildings ahead of her. After a long moment, she 
inhaled deeply, and exhaled a long, soft sighed. Turning to 
Satoru, she nodded once, announcing her oracular decision.
     "You're going to get me a drink at the Cafe Pierrot!"
     Satoru frowned.  "Why am I not surprised?"
     "Please?  Take me there, please?"  Kaori pouted.
     "Well..."  Satoru hesitated.  He was in trouble; she was 
breaking out the heavy artillery.  He looked down the street, 
trying to avoid her watery gaze.  "But..."  His willpower was 
fading.  He glanced at her against his better judgment.  She 
tilted her head coyly.
     Satoru hung his head and sighed.
     "Thank you!"  Kaori twirled around her friend, poked him on 
the nose and skipped ahead three steps before Satoru could argue 
the decision.  He jogged to catch up, feeling relieved that she 
had decided not to run in response.  Apparently, he had paid 
enough penance for his mathematical arrogance.

     The Cafe Pierrot wasn't a very popular spot for high school 
kids; it was mostly a haunt for well-to-do college students and 
successful graduates.  Satoru felt a little strange entering the 
place, but he rationalized that since he was going to be a college 
student in a few months, he'd be okay.
     The Cafe served all manner of cuisine and drinks, from any 
country one readily knew about.  The atmosphere was decidedly 
French, with a few tables just outside the building's front 
window, and lightweight furniture inside.
     It was in the late afternoon; the window let in the late rays 
of the day, filtered only by the painted logo.  Satoru and Kaori 
entered, and were seated at the last available table, in a rather 
subdued corner of the cafe.
     "Can I get you anything to drink?"  The waitress clicked her 
pen and flipped to a fresh page on her pad.
     "Two lemonades, please."  Kaori announced.  Satoru wished 
that just once he could order for them.
     "I'll return with them in just a moment!"  The waitress left 
them to a conversation Satoru had waited a long while to start.
     "Did you get the scholarship?"  He looked towards the 
kitchen, trying to seem nonchalant.
     "I sure did!  I got the confirmation letter yesterday 
afternoon.  College is as good as paid for!"  Kaori sounded like 
she was still looking straight at Satoru, but he didn't dare look 
her in the eye.  This wasn't something he enjoyed bringing up.
     "So you're definitely going to college in America?"
     "Well, yeah.  The University of Oregon has better modern 
music and jazz programs than anything around here.  At least, 
anything I could afford."  Kaori's tone seemed a little more 
concerned.  Satoru imagined that she was still smiling, but that 
the smile was probably fading quickly.
     "And you'll be gone all four years?"
     "Satoru, what are you getting at?"
     Satoru felt himself crossing the line between pleasant 
conversation and serious discussion.  He forced himself to look at 
Kaori.  Her smile had weakened somewhat; it seemed to be trying to 
convince itself that it was okay to exist.
     Satoru heard the beginnings of a chuckle, but it stopped 
short.
     "I... I'm..."  He paused, again unsure of how he should 
phrase it.  He closed his eyes, and recited his statement.  "I'm 
going to miss you."  Finally, he added, "A lot."
     "And I'm going to miss you, too.  You're my best friend.  But 
I'll be back.  I promise."
     "You promise?"  The question sounded so pathetic to Satoru as 
it came out that he couldn't believe he had even *considered* 
saying it.  He inhaled sharply and hoped she hadn't heard.
     Kaori smiled motheringly.  "Of course I promise.  Here."  She 
set her arm on the table like she was about to arm-wrestle.  Her 
pinkie pointed out at the end of her fist.
     "A pinkie swear?"  Satoru chuckled in disbelief.
     "I wouldn't joke if I were you.  Now, get it up here!"
     Satoru had to smile at the melodrama of it all.  "Okay, okay!  
I believe you!"  He reluctantly linked his pinkie with hers.  
"You'll write me letters, right?"
     "I will write you letters..." she closed her eyes and 
repeated his words solemnly.
     "And you'll call me?"
     "I will call you..." she smiled, her eyes still closed.  "But 
I'll call collect."
     Satoru gaped.  "Not from America you won't!"  The pair began 
to snicker, and that mutual giggle turned into a full-blown laugh 
by the time the waitress arrived with their lemonades.  When 
Satoru realized the waitress was setting down their lemonades, he 
yanked back his pinkie and stared intensely at the icy drinks.
     "Don't tell me you're trying to impress the waitress," Kaori 
chided when they were once again alone.  Satoru looked up 
shamefully; Kaori's gray eyes beamed.
     "Don't you *ever* get depressed?"  Satoru took a sip of his 
lemonade.
     "Nope."
     "How do you do it?"
     "That's a secret."  Kaori turned her attention to her drink.
     "Aww, c'mon.  You can tell me."  Satoru grinned.
     "This is really good lemonade.  I think I'll order another."
     "If you do, you're paying for it," Satoru huffed.  "And don't 
try to change the subject."
     "Forget it, Nobata," Kaori drained the glass.  "I'll never 
tell.  You can torture me, kill me, but I'll never tell.  Never!"  
Kaori's smirk challenged Satoru's pride.
     "You're beyond insane, you realize."
     "But of course."  Kaori made eye contact with the waitress 
and shook her glass.  The waitress nodded and headed to the 
kitchen.
     After they finished, Satoru paid, and they returned home.  
Their homes stood across the street from each other in a quiet 
residential area.  This was not by accident; their families had 
been friends since before either of them had been born.  And when 
they were born, it was a week that separated them.
     "See ya."  They parted ways near Kaori's door, comfortable in 
their friendship and confident in their futures.
     When it came time for Kaori to board her flight to Oregon, 
Satoru wasn't so confident.  He had to come up with seven separate 
excuses as to why his eyes were "mysteriously watering."  When he 
finally used "there's something in my eye again," Kaori smiled and 
stepped close.
     She kissed him on the cheek.
     "Thank you, Satoru."  Her whisper barely made it to Satoru's 
ears.  Satoru touched his cheek as she stepped back.
     Kaori seemed to turned in slow-motion; Satoru thought he saw 
a tear fall to her cheek, and realized the airport was fading from 
view.
     She was all he saw; 17 years of Kaori flashed in front of him 
as she turned to pick up her bag.  She evolved in that single 
action.  Kaori considered the backpack for a moment as the curious 
red-haired pre-schooler with a chubby face and dimples.  She 
reached for it as the lanky tomboy with too-long legs and too-
short hair.  As she hefted the bag, she became the girl who could 
run faster than all the boys.  And always she had that smile; that 
smile could melt ice.
     And as she walked to the gate, she was everything she had 
been before that moment, and somehow just a little more.  With her 
chin up, shoulders back, walking steps measured and prepared, she 
boarded the plane.

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     Kaori called collect when she landed at Portland Airport, and 
again when she landed at the Eugene Airport, a hundred miles south 
of Portland.  Once at the university, she wrote him five letters, 
and he responded five times.  The letters were comfortably long, 
and spoke highly of the campus, and of her classes.  Satoru talked 
a little about Nekomi Tech, and about his work as a chemistry 
major.
     She mentioned Ryan and Ami, her "new friends," a few times.  
She even sent a couple of pictures with her third letter, but for 
the most part, the letters remained a jealously private matter 
between her and Satoru.  They talked about themselves, and asked 
concerned but lightweight questions about the other.  Every 
question was answered, even though the answers were often short, 
joking statements.  Satoru looked forward to the day when the 
letter from Kaori came in the mail; when she stopped sending them, 
he went into a funk that lasted for two weeks.  That was when he 
ran into Yumiko and Ichiro.  Literally.

     "Sorry, I wasn't looking," Satoru mumbled the apology.  He 
had been looking down, lost in thought, when he nearly ran over a 
very tall, and equally slight, blond man.  The shorter girl beside 
him chuckled quietly as her companion picked himself up.
     "Not a problem.  Say, maybe you can settle something for us."  
The man stood and brushed off his pant legs.  "What's the best 
place for dinner around here?  We've been trying to find one good 
place around here all term, but we just can't..."
     "...Cafe Pierrot."  The name pushed itself from Satoru's 
lips.  It had been on his mind just before.  He stared at a leaf 
on the sidewalk as the thoughts picked up again.
     "Cafe Pierrot.  Can't say I've heard of it.  But, we're not 
from around here, so..."
     Satoru blinked himself back into reality.  "It's not too far 
from here, but not really close either.  What kind of food do you 
like?"
     "Italian."  Both answered simultaneously.
     "Me too.  The Cafe Pierrot has a decent international menu. 
It may have changed since the last time I was there, but it used 
to have a really good lasagna."  Satoru smiled.  "I'm sorry.  My 
name's Satoru.  Satoru Nobata."  He bowed quickly.
     "Pleased to meet you."  The man bowed deeply.  "I'm Ichiro 
Sugimoto, and this is Yumiko Kitamura."  He motioned to the girl 
next to him, who nodded demurely.  "We're living in the dorms near 
the Engineering building."
     "Pleased to meet you.  I live a few buildings down, across 
from the Chemistry building."
     "Very cool.  Say, Yumiko and I were just about to order some 
take-out.  Would you like to join us?"
     Satoru brightened immediately.  "I'd love to."
     Ichiro chuckled nervously and motioned Satoru to a private 
conference a few steps away from Yumiko.  "I hate to ask you so 
early in our friendship, but I'm a little strapped for cash at the 
moment.  Can you pay for yourself?"  He laughed nervously.
     Satoru grinned.  "Not a problem.  Why don't I pay for the 
whole thing?  I bumped into you in the first place; and I should 
apologize somehow."
     "Oh, I couldn't..."  Ichiro seemed less than enthusiastic in 
his refusal.  Satoru's grin widened.
     "Oh, but I insist."
     "Thank you!  Your hospitality becomes you.  Now, lead on, 
Satoru Nobata."
     "Where?"
     "To your dorm room, of course!"  Ichiro stepped back beside 
Yumiko and smiled.  "My room's a mess, and nobody's ever seen 
Yumiko's room..."  Yumiko giggled and looked away.  "That leaves 
your room.  So lead on!"

     After consideration, Satoru decided Yumiko and Ichiro 
reminded him a little of Kaori and himself when they were in 
junior high.  Though, he never saw too much of himself directly in 
Ichiro.  The pair was fun-loving, perhaps a bit too much, and made 
a point of not liking each other too much.  Yumiko was straight-
forward, like Kaori, but not so effervescent.  She shied away from 
outdoor sports, but watched them if Ichiro played.
     Ichiro's lean musculature implied an athletic slant, and he 
was indeed good at sports in general, but seemed to take little 
interest in them.  Satoru figured this was because of Yumiko, but 
he never pressed the point to Ichiro.  On the whole, he seemed a 
good complement to Yumiko; when they were seen, they were 
together, always smiling or just about to.
     Satoru's dorm room soon became the nexus for the activities 
of the group.  He had the television and the stereo, and seemed to 
be the only one of the three with any money whatsoever.  It was a 
Tuesday night in early November when Satoru decided they would 
meet at Ichiro's room for a change.
     "Aww, man!  Why my room?"  Ichiro complained over the phone.  
"You've got all the goodies in your room."  Satoru audibly 
frowned.
     "Look, I don't want to meet at my place.  We're just going 
out to pizza anyway.  We'll be at your place for a minute, two 
tops.  Yumiko knows where it is, right?"  Satoru grinned.
     "Very funny, Nobata.  Fine, we'll meet at my place, but 
you're not coming into my room."
     "Why?  Afraid I'll see all the nasty posters you have on your 
ceiling?" Satoru could hear Ichiro growl on the other end, and 
chuckled nervously.  "I'm joking!  Just a joke!  Okay, we'll wait 
outside the building for you."
     "This is your treat, right?"
     "You two can owe me.  I'll be over in a sec, 'kay?"
     "You know I won't pay you back."  Ichiro was smiling.
     "I'm keeping track of your tab."
     "What's it at?"
     "You don't wanna know.  I'll see you in a minute.  Bye!"
     "See ya."
     Satoru hung up the phone and put on his shoes.  He was at the 
door when the phone rang.  He wondered what Ichiro could want now.
     "Now what?"  He answered the phone on the third ring.
     "...He.. Hello?"  The voice at the other end was a girl's.  
Very soft, almost inaudible over the background noise.
     "Hello?  Who is this?"
     "...I'm sorry... I must have the wrong number."  The line 
died after those words.  Then his mind caught up with his ears.
     "Kaori!"  But it was way too late.
     Satoru dialed Ichiro.  "Ichiro?  Look, why don't you guys 
meet me here, 'kay?  Bye."  He hung up as quickly as possible.      
"What if she calls back and I miss it?  She sounded terrible.  
What's going on?  Where is she?"  The thoughts at the front of his 
brain refused to remain silent.  Possibilities flashed through 
Satoru's mind faster and more vividly than he cared to consider.
     "Please call me back,"  Satoru pleaded with the phone.  
"Please?"
     Ichiro knocked on Satoru's door.  Yumiko was only two steps 
behind.
     "Why the sudden change of plans?"  Ichiro was smiling but 
nervously so.  "You sounded like you'd just seen a ghost."
     "I might have."  The response didn't sit well with either of 
the guests; they sat on the floor and watched Satoru stare at the 
phone.
     "Is the phone trying to attack you?"  Yumiko smiled as she 
said it.  Satoru didn't respond except with a 'shhh'.  The silence 
seeped into the room between the voices from outside.  It was 
almost too thick for Yumiko to bear, and she shifted loudly on the 
floor.
     When the phone rang, it shocked all three of them.  Satoru 
answered before the ring ended.
     "Kaori?"
     "Sa... Satoru?"
     "It's me.  What's wrong?"
     "Can you...?"
     "Yes?"
     "Can you pick me up at the airport?"
     "Which one?"
     "Haneda.  Please hurry."
     "Which gate?"
     "I... I don't know..."
     "Okay.  I'll meet you in the main lobby.  Does that sound 
okay to you?"
     "...Yes."  A pause.  "Thank you, Satoru."
     "You're welcome, and you hang on, okay?  I'll be there in 
just a second."
     "Thank you, Satoru."  Kaori sounded calmer, but still so 
strange.  Satoru tried to chalk it up to not hearing her voice in 
such a long while, but it didn't seem to fit into that rationale.
     "Ichiro, I need you to drive me to Haneda Airport.  Now."  
Satoru was already at the door, in his coat and shoes, waiting 
impatiently.
     "Sure, but why?"
     "My best friend Kaori needs a ride home, and she doesn't 
sound well."  Satoru's voice caught both Yumiko and Ichiro by 
surprise.  Even at his most serious, he never sounded this 
intense.  Yumiko stood and got her coat.
     "We'd be glad to help you out.  Any friend of yours..."
     "Thanks, Yumiko, but we gotta hurry.  So, shall we?"
     The ride to the airport was interminably long.  Ichiro was 
flooring it, but the tiny Civic wasn't making much headway past 
120 kph.  They lucked out, and didn't get caught by the police, 
even though Satoru promised to pay any tickets.  When they arrived 
at the airport, Satoru ran inside while Ichiro and Yumiko looked 
for a parking spot.  He sprinted into the main waiting area, 
scanning the weary faces.  None were hers.
     "Kaori!"  Satoru shouted with all the power his lungs could 
muster.  "Kaori Akazawa!"  He only hoped she could hear him.
     "Satoru," Kaori's voice seemed to exhale its thankfulness.  
Satoru whipped his body around to see her standing beside him, 
with one suitcase and an exhausted smile on her face.
     "Are you okay?  You sounded like you were in trouble."
     "I'm sorry, Satoru.  I didn't mean... to upset you."  Kaori 
looked at the floor as Satoru picked up her suitcase.
     "Is this all you brought?"
     Kaori nodded slowly.
     "My car's outside.  Actually, I got a ride from a friend, so 
it might be a little cramped."  Kaori followed Satoru outside, 
where Yumiko was waiting.
     "Ichiro's double-parked, so we'd better hurry."  Yumiko saw 
Kaori and smiled.  "Hello, you must be Kaori.  My name's Yumiko."
     "Pleased to meet you."  Kaori avoided Yumiko's concerned gaze 
and followed the pair to Ichiro's car.  Ichiro was leaning against 
the driver's side door, none too happy about the parking ticket he 
had received while waiting.
     "You're covering this, right?"  Ichiro waved the ticket in 
his hand.
     "Yeah yeah sure.  Just open the trunk, okay?"  Ichiro 
grudgingly complied.
     Once they were all in the car, Ichiro finally smiled.  "So, 
where are we off to?"  He turned to look back at Satoru and Kaori.  
Kaori looked up from Satoru's shoulder with a gray, watery gaze, 
but kept her arms firmly wrapped around his arm.  Ichiro stifled a 
chuckle; she looked a bit like a frightened koala.
     "Your parents are probably worried," Yumiko offered.
     "Yeah, maybe we should head to your house."  Satoru scanned 
Kaori's face for a reaction, but it remained still for a few 
moments before she shook her head.
     "Let's just go to your place," she half-whispered.
     "But don't you think...?"  Yumiko began to say something, but 
when she turned to make eye-contact with Kaori, the expression she 
caught made her bite her tongue.
     Ichiro was the first to speak again.  "We still need to order 
that pizza."
     "Actually, I think it might be best if... you know."  Satoru 
felt Kaori's head rest once again on his shoulder.  "I don't want 
to sound rude, but this *is* a little unexpected, and I think that 
maybe Kaori and I would do best if..."
     "Say no more!" Ichiro announced.  "We can survive without 
you.  If you could lend us 2000, I think we'll be fine."  Satoru 
saw Ichiro smiling in the rear-view mirror.  He sighed and reached 
for the wallet.
     "I don't need it *now*.  You have other problems."
     Satoru exhaled with relief.
     "You can give it to me at your place."
     Satoru felt Kaori smile as he fumed.  She pressed herself 
closer, and exhaled in what sounded like comfortable satisfaction.  
Satoru felt her breathing even out a little, and figured she was 
already asleep.  He smiled and looked out the tiny window.  Lights 
passed by, screaming white then red.  Satoru wondered if the 
drivers were chasing after somebody.  He felt Kaori squeeze a 
little closer, and wanted to return the closeness, but something 
stopped him.  Drops spattered on the windows in random galaxies of 
water; it had finally started raining.

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Wednesday, November 5, 1997
6:17 AM.

     Satoru woke up before dawn the next morning.  As he rubbed 
the sleep from his eyes, he wondered what could have triggered the 
elaborate dream he had just had.  It wasn't the first dream he'd 
had with Kaori in it.  But this one was so strange.  It was 
unnaturally dark, and way too real.  He reached above and behind 
him, trying to find that light-switch which he *knew* was around 
there somewhere.
     80 watts of incandescence flooded the room.  While Satoru 
squinted at the overpowering light, he heard Kaori whispering 
something unintelligible.  He looked at the floor, and saw her 
shift under his blue comforter.  Satoru wanted to feel shocked, 
and pretend she had appeared magically.  He knew, though, that her 
presence only confirmed his dream, and everything associated with 
it.
     From his vantage-point on the bed, Satoru saw Kaori's 
sleeping shape, made unusually plush by the comforter.  She was 
laying on her side, facing him.  He licked his lips with a dry 
tongue and sighed.
     He was reaching up for the light-switch again when he heard 
her voice.  "G'morning."  She smiled and propped herself up on one 
elbow.  "We haven't done this in a long time."
     "What?"  Satoru flipped through his mind for two memories 
like *that* that could possibly connect themselves.  "Did we...?"
     "Sleep over.  The last time I slept over at your house, we 
were in fourth grade, remember?  That was the time you had the pet 
frog hidden in your room and he escaped."
     "And mom found her in the kitchen."  Satoru started breathing 
again.  "I remember now."
     Kaori smiled.  "That was a fun night."
     "It sure was."  Satoru returned a smile, but couldn't find 
the energy to sustain it.  "I didn't mean to turn on the light.  
You should get back to sleep.  You've probably got terrible..."
     "Okay.  G'night."  Kaori was asleep before her head returned 
to the pillow.
     "...jet lag.  Good night."  Satoru's voice decayed to a 
whisper; he flipped the light-switch off and returned to bed.
     He didn't get any more sleep.  In the pre-dawn glow, he could 
see Kaori's shape breathing, moving softly and evenly; she seemed 
to be a lot better than she had been at the airport, but still...
     "What's the matter, Kaori?"  Satoru mouthed the words, daring 
not even to whisper them.  "Why did you come back?"
	Satoru finally rolled on his back.  "Did you know I'd come 
running after you?"  He yawned.  "Of course you did.  I always 
do."  He looked over again to Kaori.  "I guess that's my role in 
life, right?  Your solemn protector?"  He whispered the words, 
hoping maybe they'd filter into her dreams.
     The boy grinned at his new-found courage.  "I guess I can 
handle that."

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AUTHOR'S NOTES:
If you're at this point in the story, I thank you.  Welcome to 
"Okaeri, Kaori-chan!"  With any luck these notes will be short and 
efficiently used, so I'll skip a lot of the usual happiness and 
get to a few of the points.

First, to give credit where it is (over)due.  This story was 
thoroughly pre-read by The Mokonators:  Jim Nutley, Eimii, T.H. 
Tiger, and Ben Williamson.  They were brutal, but it was well 
worth it.  Without them, this story would have really sucked, no 
bones about it.  Thank you guys!  May I have another?  ^_^

"Like the time...":  The quote at the beginning is from the Yes 
song "Awaken" off the 1977 album "Going For The One."

Measurements:  Satoru is about 5' 8".  That makes Kaori about two 
inches shorter at 5' 6" or so.  And the Civic was speeding at 
about 75 mph.

*That* Nekomi?:  Yep, they're all going to Nekomi Tech.  Does this 
mean you'll see the Goddesses three (or four)?  No.  Will you see 
minor characters?  Maybe.  Just don't expect anyone with forehead 
markings to show up.

I debated for a long while about doing character descriptions ala 
Stephen Tsai and Co.'s "Kimagure Orange College," but eventually 
decided against it.  This is because he was writing in script 
form, and didn't have the opportunity to use prose to describe 
people in action.

Finally, there are bound to be inaccuracies (traffic laws, dorm 
policies, etc.).  If you could be so kind as to gently point them 
out to me, I'd very much appreciate it.

This series will be published bi-weekly (twice a month) to give me 
time to write and go to college.  This first story arc will be 
around 8 or 9 episodes long, though the series as a whole is 
probably going to be longer (maybe as many as 26 episodes if all 
goes well).

Next Episode:  "Kaori's Return: 'So Sorry To Disturb You...'"