"You're still too young to be thinking about things like that," Kasumi had
offered once when Akane had come to her for advice. Her words had rung
true in Akane's heart, but something else kept resurfacing, wanting to
prove her sister's words wrong. If only�
Gotta be careful... Your ellipses... are being converted by whatever
WP/email program you're using.
Weird. I've been posting stories to the FFML for over 3 years now and
that's the first time that's happened. I checked out the fic after getting
it back from the ML and it's a mess compared to what I sent out :/ Then
again, I just got a newer version of MS Word... Hmmmmm ;)
The royal blue sky of afternoon was now glowing dark crimson, as the
drifting white sands of the clouds above faded into dark shadowy streamers
that pointed themselves towards the setting sun. Ranma drew the crying
girl in his arms towards him, not knowing what else to say or do.
Everything will change all right, and there was nothing he could do
about >>it. Akane would be leaving in the fall, though they still had the
summer >>together. But at the moment, that fact just didn't seem to make
him feel >>any better about her leaving.
Big problem here, Japanese schools run from April to March with summer
break in the middle of the school year. So they'd be finishing High
School in March and have about two weeks before starting College in early
April.
Erk :) My own ignorance to blame there :P But I'm learning! After writing
and reading BGC stories exclusively for the last 3 years, a friend sent me
an enormous box of anime videos, and the first thing I watched were 4 TV
seasons worth and all the OAVs of Ranma, so this is my very first attempt
at writing a Ranma fic. I must say, there is much more to it than I first
thought ;)
Otherwise, it was a nice little story.
-=-
Jim Lazar
Thanks for the comments Jim. Much appreciated :)
Andy Skuse
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