Ecchi: A fanfic nightmare.
Warning: This is a very graphic Fanfic. It contains scenes of
gratuitous sex, naughty tentacles, bad language, violence, and really
cool one liners.
You have been warned!
He awoke in the darkness and frowned. He had no idea where he was
or how he had gotten there. The last thing he remembered was vaulting in
front of a blast of some sort in an effort to shield one of his friends
from an angry witch or something. Then he was here.
It was a school room of some sort, he shifted around and sat up
only to slam his head against the bottom of a desk. "Shit!" he muttered
as he rubbed at it. His mind wandered back to what had occurred...
Her name was Kiri Saotori. She was a foreign exchange student
from Japan. The school year had almost ended and her revenge would be
complete. It would cost her own life, but her honor was gone; stolen from
her by the one named Dean. He was your typical blond haired blue eyed
football hero. Right down to the nazi essque patterns of violent
behavior. She had not known that though; no one did. He had been the
first foreign boy who really talked to her. He knew passable Japanese and
had friends who seemed to like her. They were great people.
Until two weeks after she met him. He had taken her out and raped
her in the back of his parents car. After she bled on the upholstery he
slapped her in his anger and left her ten miles from home. About a half
hour later he returned to bring her home, begging her to keep quiet about
it. She agreed. In the months that followed she let the wound fester and
grow, her hatred got stronger as she felt ashamed and unfit to return to
her family. He had even bragged about her letting him fuck her. She kept
quiet, there was nothing she could do. Not until now.
Her family line was a long history of Japanese witches and Mages.
Her family had always followed the path of light. She had fallen into the
murky gray when the act had been committed.
The others had been nice to her. His friend quickly became her
own. Her upbringing kept her from holding them responsible for his
actions and she saw no reason to tell them of their friends dark side. No
doubt they had seen it before; just not in the same way as she had. One
boy in particular had been supportive of her. His name was Robert,
everyone called him Duke though, he was sixteen, a freshman, and almost
as handsome as Dean. His nationality was Irish; he had short cut sandy
blonde hair and brown eyes. He kept in reasonable shape and was of
average height. One odd thing about him was the way he dressed he always
wore a pair of Ray-ban shades and blue jeans. That is where he earned his
nick name. Only a few people knew where it came from but he liked it
enough to prefer it over his own name. He was fairly strong for his size
and also extremely smart. She knew this because she had developed a crush
on him. She kept it secret because of her shame and kept by Dean's side.
She had to keep the image of a happy relationship with him.
Now was the time for the sharade to end. A package had arrived
from Okinawa. Her grandmother had come through for her. Inside was an
ancient scroll, and she knew exactly where to send the man who had taken
her innocence. A place where he would spend an eternity in the hell of
what he had taken from her. She walked up behind him and slit her wrist
completing the spell.
The screaming started before that ever happened. They had
gathered for a pizza after classes that day and were talking about how
sorry they were that she was occupied and could not come. A bitter sweet
smile crossed her face as she realized that she would no longer hold a
pleasant memory in their hearts. Vengeance came first, besides it didn't
matter. She was covered in dirt and blood from the sacrifices that the
rite required as well as the grueling physical pain from the self
inflicted wounds. Even without silting her wrist she would have died in a
few hours anyway. A ball of light formed in her hands as she uttered the
last words of the passage and thrust her hands forward. The look on his
face would justify her eternity in hell, she smiled.
Until Robert turned to face her. The look on his face tore at her
heart, first it was concern for her, then a shocking realization. He spun
towards Dean and shoved him to the ground and away from her; Just in time
to save him, but not himself. He vanished in a spectacular burst of
light.
"NOOOOOOO!!!!" she screamed as she fell and died.
Who the hell was that? Why had she done it? A quick look around
and he realized that he may never know the answer to that. "Where is
everybody?" he called.
He heard something in the background stop that he had failed to
notice. He looked behind him to see a boy about his own age bent over a
woman of about thirty, a very attractive thirty. She was gasping and
still unaware of his presence. The boy however just stared at him in
shocked horror. He was dressed in a high school uniform from a Japanese
Manga and he had his hands planted firmly on the woman's exposed breast.
He shifted slightly and Duke realized that the boy's pants were around
his ankles and he was having trouble disengaging from her because her
legs were keeping him in place. "What's wrong Sho-chan?" she gasped in a
passionate voice.
"Ooops," said Duke as he just stared back. He wasn't sure where
he was but it sure as hell wasn't the pizza joint.
"What are you doing here?!!" cried the woman as she finally
noticed him.
"Ah! Geez man! Could you turn around man?! I don't want to see
that!" cried Duke as he shielded his face with his arms.
Neither of the pair looked happy at being interrupted. "Who are
you and what are you doing in my room?" repeated the woman angrily.
"I'm Robert Coley, you can call me Duke," said the boy
reflexively. "And I'm not even sure where I am, I just sort of woke up
here. I think it was a prank, my friends are known for this sort of
thing."
The pair relaxed visibly, mostly because they didn't recognize
him. "Could you leave?" asked the boy impatiently.
"Yea, sorry," said Duke as he staggered towards the door.
"Wait!" cried the woman in a panic, a look of fear crossed her
face.
"Don't worry, I'm not even sure which school I'm in. I won't tell
anyone," reassured Duke as he walked out the door and into the dark
hallways.
She stood there with an uncertain and fearful look on her face
and just watched helplessly as he wandered away.
The first surprise came when he reached the outside and saw the
town he was in. It was definitely not America. All the signs were in
Japanese and the businesses were all closed around him. It had to be the
middle of the night. Almost in answer the tower above the school chimed
in twelve times. He frowned as he started to walk unsure of what to do.
He only knew one thing; this was not one of his friends jokes.
He walked deeper into the business section of the town and sighed
as he began to see people around him. None of them looked Japanese
though, well most of them didn't anyway. Those that did where mostly men.
Many of the women had strange hair colors, like green and blue. He
stopped suddenly.
"I can read all the signs!" he cried in shock. "What the hell is
going on here?!"
"Why have you come before me? You are a lost soul, you can never
enter heaven or hell. Your soul was wasted on petty revenge!" cried the
great booming voice from the heavenly altar.
"Lord Enma. I come not for final judgment, I knew my fate before
I died. I need help, an innocent soul has been unjustly sentenced because
of my own error," said the soul before him.
"Eh? How can this be? I have never judged unjustly!!" he cried
angrily.
"You misunderstand great lord, I condemned him," said the soul
with her resolve wavering in the great gods anger.
"I see, you must speak with the Goddess of Fate. My powers only
lie in judgment, I can see you speak the truth. You may pass for audience
with the goddess.�
"I thank you," said the soul weakly.
"Heh, don't. Once that wrong is righted you are back to your
wandering for eternity. Nothing can prevent that," said Enma coldly.
Duke sat on a bench and held his head in his hands. "What
happened to me?" he gasped as he pulled his legs in to his chest and
looked off into the deserted park. A couple walked by and smiled
cheerfully at him. He nodded back at them and continued his desperate
search for answers. None came.
"I can't just sit here, I need to find out where I am. Then I'll
need some money," he said as he stood and shook off the panic that had
set in. He headed for some bright lights in the distance. He passed by
dark alleys and walked through the shadows as the lights of the city grew
closer and the noise of people began to fill his ears. He felt a great
relief just feeling the noise of the city draw nearer. An attractive
young woman of about seventeen strolled towards him on her way home. He
smiled and picked up his step as she passed him. He was still moving
pretty slowly though, she was obviously in a hurry and she turned towards
an apartment about four blocks ahead of him. He stopped and glared at
something move in the shadows. He wasn't sure what it was, but it was
very large. Then it was gone, but not before two red eyes stared at him
for a split second before vanishing.
Duke just stood and stared into the alley for a long time. He was
absolutely petrified, what ever it was it was much too large for a dog.
He turned away after almost fifteen minutes and staggered towards the
city again. "Maybe it was just a dog on top of a dumpster," he told
himself.
Her name was Hire Sato, she had long dark hair and a very nice
body; she was also tall for a Japanese girl. She had an air of snobbish
arrogance about her as she strolled down the street. She walked past a
strange boy with a haunted look on his face and walked by quickly towards
her home. He smiled at her weakly and sped up his pace a bit as she
walked by, but then returned to his methodical stagger after she had
passed him. "He's probably drunk," she told herself as she gave him
another quick glance as she skipped up the stairs to her home. "At least
he has the dignity to try to hide it," she muttered to herself.
She lived with her parents in a large four room apartment in the
suburbs of Tokyo. Her school was only a short jog to the east. She had
just returned from a late night of studying with two of her girlfriends.
Her parents knew she would be there late and had probably gone to bed
long ago. She hadn't been expecting it to last quite as long as it did.
She had gone into a long discussion of how Hiroma; the cutest guy
in school had been making eyes with her during class. Then it shifted
over to her prize winning Archery and Kendo skills. The three of them
were all on the teams, but she was the best in the school. Quite possibly
the best in Tokyo, or Japan for that matter. She offered modesty and
quietly accepted their praises. She had worked long and hard to aquire
her skills though and she was proud of them.
She opened the door to her room and snuck in quietly. The
memories of her day played in her mind and she smiled as she undressed
and took out her nightgown. She smiled as she looked at her naked body in
the mirror. She thought of Takama and blushed slightly. It would be so
nice if he was her first. Her fingers began to creep slowly down her
stomach and her right hand gently cupped her breast. She collapsed on the
bed and quietly moaned in pleasure.
That was when they came.
"Oh, look at what we found!" cried a high pitched voice from the
corner.
"Looks like a hungry clit!" said another as it giggled its shrill
laugh from directly behind her.
Hire's eyes shot open. She gasped and started to scream as hands
grabbed for her. There where three of them, and they swarmed on her body
and covered her mouth easily. She struggled but they held her down.
They were disgusting creatures. They were humanoid and about
three feet tall. They had long skinny arms and grotesque bald heads with
a single long horn protruding from their foreheads. They all had yellow
eyes and short pointy teeth.
One of them moved it's head down her waist and sniffed at her
pussy. "Ah! A virgin!" he screeched as he stuck his long swollen tongue
out and lapped at her juices. She shuddered in revoltion and struggled
harder. One of the other creatures had craned it's neck around her own
and she moved her head away from it. The thing stuck it's tongue out and
began to lick and suck at her nipples. The last creature merely settled
for fondling her other breast roughly.
"No!" she gasped through the creatures hand. The one at her feet
forced her legs apart again and stuck it's head down between her legs
piercing her cunt with it's six inch horn. She gasped in pain and
struggled again as her hymen broke. "Not like this!" she thought in
shock.
"Look at her juices flow! Do you feel the pleasure I give you?"
cried the one that was jabbing her roughly with it's horn.
"I think she's enjoying it! Look at her nipples!" cried the one
that was licking at her breast as he intensified his sucking. She cried
out in pain as his teeth scraped at her sensitive nipple.
Hire heard the sound of breaking glass and the one at her lap
vanished in a cry of pain. The others were to shocked to move as a hand
reached down and grabbed one of the ones at her side by the head and slam
it into a wall.
"What?!" screamed the remaining demon as a foot came down on it's
head forcing it to the ground and away from Hire.
"Are you all right?" asked a tense sounding voice.
Hire rushed to her feet and pressed herself against her
mysterious savior in shock and desperation. One of the creatures
staggered to it's feet and glared at the man angrily. "You will die!"
Hire heard the man laugh unhumorously and she backed away
slightly. "Come get some," said the boy. Hire recognized him now. He was
the boy she had passed on the street.
The little monster jumped for him and he punched it out of the
air sending it flying into a wall. The other two circled around him
carefully.
"Weak human! We'll kill you!" cried one of them.
"We have to get out of here and find some place public now," said
the boy.
"What? Who are you? What are these things?" she cried angrily as
she regained her senses.
"Not the time for introductions girl! Move! We have to get out
before the big one shows!" cried Rob as he pulled her towards the broken
window.
A deep rumbling laugh came from the closet doors. The boy's
expression changed from one of anger to fear. "Too late," he said
quietly. He put his fist up, he could not escape if the girl would not
follow him willingly.
"Girl listen to me now, what those things were doing is nothing
compared to what this thing want's from you we have to get out now!" he
cried as he tried for one more desperate lunge for the window. The girl
refused to cooperate. She twisted her weight and flicked her wrist
sending Duke to the ground hard on his back.
That was when he saw the tentacles move towards him along the
floor. One of them wrapped around his leg and he looked and saw the head
on the end of it. He was now sure of what he was facing. He grabbed the
nearby bed post and tried to pull his leg free but more tentacles emerged
from the closet and wrapped around his body and limbs. He turned and saw
that Hire was being held by many of the things. Some of them moved freely
around her and began to move towards her cunt and any other hole in her
body. Three had already forced their way into her mouth. He turned away
in disgust and felt his body rise from the ground and move towards the
hulking monster that emerged from the darkness of the closet. It was
exactly what he expected, it's hair was made of long tentacles and he had
several larger one's protruding from his back. It had a cunt on it's
forehead and it's fingers were also tentacles. A great mane of fur
surrounded it's waist and a monstrous cock of about four feet in length
and easily a foot in diameter rose from the mass of fur. It glared at him
with it's glowing red eyes and chuckled to itself.
"Puny human, you should have minded your own business," it said.
Duke froze in terror as he felt one of the tentacles move it's
way up his pants leg. "No!" he screamed as he intensified his struggle.
The creature pulled him close and gazed into his eyes. "Now watch
as I fuck this girl and make her my eternal slave."
"You keep your filthy hand's off her!" cried Duke angrily as he
struggled. One of the tentacles finally made it and thrusted up his ass.
He screamed in pain and writhed angrily tightening his buttocks in a
desperate attempt to force it out. Another larger and grotesquely swollen
tentacle actually enveloped his own dick in the slit at the end of it's
head as his pants were torn from his body. He screamed again and one of
the monster's hair tentacles forced it's way into his mouth.
Duke glared at the monster as it moved the barely conscious Hire
close to him and forced her legs open. That was when he bit down, hard.
The monster screamed in pain as the tentacles holding Duke
clenched tight cutting off his circulation and breathing. He was lifted
into the air and slammed into the ground. "For that you die!" cried the
monster as it pulled the dazed boy up to it's face again.
That was the opportunity he had been waiting for. Duke pulled his
head back and slammed it into the monster's forehead causing he beast to
stagger back. The tentacle on his right arm uncoiled and the others
loosened. Duke reached back and punched the monster dead in the face as
it recovered from the first blow. The tentacles caught his arms and legs
again and he thrust his head forward. This time however he clamped his
teeth down hard on the monsters neck. It howled in rage as Duke felt the
skin break and the hot rancid blood poured into his mouth. He let it run
down his face and increased the pressure as the thing tried to pull him
off his neck. Finally Duke found the strength to bite completely through.
The monster's blood was shooting from it's neck in a rhythmic spurt as
it's heart pumped the blood through it�s viens. It growled and Duke fell
to the ground roughly as the tentacles dropped him and the girl.
"Fool! I'll destroy you and kill the girl now!" It screamed.
Duke smiled and kicked his foot straight up, directly into the
monster's huge sack. The thing doubled over in pain and hundreds of
tentacles rushed towards the boy. He dodged around many of them and
punched the monster in the gut before he was caught by around twenty hard
blows. Each tentacle felt like an oversized whip stinging at his face and
body. He collapsed in the corner and staggered to his feet again. The
girl lay on her side watching helplessly as she was paralyzed with fear.
Duke looked over and saw something in her eyes; a glimmer of hope. He
steeled himself and glared at the monster as it stood waiting for him.
"I will make you suffer for that!" said the thing as all of it's
tentacles reared back for an attack.
"Talk, Talk," muttered Duke under his breath.
That was when it came. A single flash of light formed over the
bed. The creature was momentarily distracted by it and Duke rushed
forward and kneed it in the gut. He was backhanded away and slammed into
the wall near the ceiling. He came down on the bed and bounced onto the
floor roughly.
The monster smiled and spit on him. "I'll fuck the girl and kill
you next," it said.
Duke said nothing and just lie in pain. Then he saw something
sitting on the ground near him. He could not believe his eyes. There was
a Kodachi and a Katana sitting on the ground just beside the monster's
feet. They were tied to a red chord and glowing with a faint blue energy.
The monster reached for Hire and turned to see him lunging for the
weapons.
"No you don't!" it cried as thirty of the whip like appendages
raced towards him. He rolled and slashed at the air in a single stroke as
he reached the blades and unsheathed them as he went.
When he stopped he noticed that he was holding the Kodachi
downward like a knife. He had never trained in a weapons style before and
the blades still felt good in his hands. He returned the sword to it's
hilt after wiping it on the remains of his pants absent mindedly. Pieces
of the monsters appendages fell to the ground messily around him and the
monster grit it's teeth in pain.
The creature snarled as he pulled the Katana from it's hilt. "All
right ugly let's dance."
The monster lunged forward and slashed at Duke with it's arm. He
rolled under the strike clumsily and took a swipe with the blade. He
missed and realized that he was not trained to use them. He'd just have
to wing it. He did have more common sense than your average anime hero.
He did not charge the monster blindly while yelling. He backed away
defensively with the blade held protecting his chest. The monster closed
very slowly and jabbed at him with the tentacles carefully. He did lose a
few, but he could grow them back in his own relm.
Duke watched the monster carefully. It narrowed it's eyes and
hesitated in a step. Duke saw an opening, he lunged forward in a downward
swipe that cut the main cock off at the base. The creature started to
howl in pain when he performed a quick reverse strike that spilled the
thing's guts on the floor, Duke continued the spin completely turning
around and the follow through took the top half of the monster's head
off. It was a clumsy and ungraceful maneuver, but that didn't matter; it
was effective.
The smaller creatures emerged from the shadows in shock and
screeched at Duke as he stood holding the sword offensively towards them.
He positioned himself between them and Hire and growled. They looked at
their fallen master's remains and scurried off into the darkness outside.
Duke turned to see the monster sinking slowly beneath the ground
and he grabbed the remains of the dick and the top if it's head and
lifted them up off the ground to keep them. "I gotta have proof." he
muttered as he placed them on a desk that sat nearby.
Hire sat naked in the corner and sobbed uncontrollably as she
watched the things vanish in one way or another. The boy looked at her
after he placed the remains off the ground. With that he collapsed on the
ground.
"No! Don't leave me!" she gasped as she rushed to his side.
"Nah, I'm just resting," he muttered. He looked badly beaten and
had bruises and small cuts all over his face, he could feel the warmth of
the blood pooling from the wounds to his ass and his mouth was swollen
and sore. He laughed and brushed some goo of the side of her face before
passing out.
"A sword!? Is that all you can do?" cried the lost soul as it
watched the pool with the goddess of fate.
"I have given him all I can. It is no ordinary sword, it will
injure anything. It is indestructible and it's power increases with his
emotions. The Kodachi disguises the presence of things, including him
and the weapons so that he may always carry them; besides he will find
other help and weapons, this first encounter will be the most dangerous.
The swords also contain the most basic skills for using them. If he
trains he will be able to defend himself easily," said Fate.
"-If- he trains? Can't you just bring him back?" asked the soul
desperately.
"No, It would cause to much disruption here. Not only because of
his return, but also because it would weaken the dimensional wall between
the worlds. That would mean those things could appear in our world as
well," said the goddess. "The door only swings one way I'm afraid."
"But..." stammered the soul in shocked horror.
"I'm afraid there is not much else I can do for him, the lesser
of two evils, you must understand that. I am sorry. I am fortunate to do
this much. I am not the Goddess of fate in that relm. She does seem to
like her new...toy."
He woke up in a strange looking bed. Hire sat looking at him
sadly and her face brightened up immediately as he woke. "Mom! dad!"
A few moments later Hire was standing with two new people over
him. He could barely move. The woman looked at him sadly. Duke smiled
slightly, "Does it really look that bad?" he asked painfully.
"Who are you?" asked the large man as he glared at him
distrustingly.
"Robert, you can call me Duke," said the boy with a small
chuckle. "You don't trust me do you?"
"I don�t know you.You come into my daughter's room armed with a
blade that I cannot touch and save her from demons. You tell me," said
the man gruffly. "For all I know you created those things."
"Dear!" said the mother in shock. Hire just sat quietly next to
Duke and watched, seemingly detached.
"He's right, but I wouldn't rape myself, I suppose he wouldn't
know that though. I'll just say I've seen things like this before, just
never dealt with them directly," Duke tried to rise and failed miserably
as his body screamed in pain.
"How did you know my daughter was being attacked?" asked the man
as he relaxed slightly.
"I saw them following her in the alleyway, then they were
crawling through the window of your home. I put two and two together and
couldn't walk away," said Duke with a lopsided grin.
"I thank you, I didn't believe her until I saw those horrible
things sitting on the desk," said the mother with tears in her eyes.
"Why?" said the girl as she finally spoke.
"Not sure, I just couldn't let it happen to anyone. I had to
fight it, I can't stand the thought of things like that happening," said
the boy with a shrug. It was the only movement he had made since he woke
that didn't hurt.
"You may stay here until you recuperate, three days at the most.
Then I ask that you move on," said the man gruffly. The girl sat
emotionlessly and the mother gave the man a disapproving stare. "Three
days," he repeated sternly at his wife.
"I thank you sir," said Duke placidly. He didn't care for the man
very much right now, but he wasn't out on the street for three days. He
knew the things would return soon. Hopefully after he recovered.
Duke sat alone with the girl after the parents walked out of the
room. They were no doubt nearby and possibly even eaves dropping. "So, I
didn't get your name."
"Hire," replied the girl calmly as she stared at him neutrally.
"Not much of a conversationalist are you?" said the boy with a
smirk.
"You are a gaijin, why would I speak to you?" she asked suddenly.
"Oh, the honor system thing. I get it now, too good to speak to
someone even when they save your ass? It's OK I understand," said Duke
with his smirk never disappearing.
"You could never understand. I want you gone, as soon as
possible," said the girl calmly. She said it as if she was giving the
time of day.
"Snooty little..." muttered Duke as he glanced around the room
casually. He noticed the two blades where still in the middle of the
floor where he had dropped them. "You just left them there? Isn't that
dangerous?"
"We...could not move them," said the girl as calmly as ever. She
gave a hateful little stare at the two swords. Duke started to roll on
his side and was beginning to reach for the nearest one despite the pain
when it shot off the floor and into his waiting hand. The girl's eyes
went wide and she gasped slightly.
Duke almost screamed as well, but some how the pain of being on
his side and the speed at which the event happened allowed him to keep
his cool. He turned to face the girl. "Look, just between you and me; I
understand that you can't ever date with me or anything because I'm a
foreigner and all. That doesn't mean I don't understand your honor system
to some degree. I have a few friends from over here. To put it simply,
your holier than thou attitude is pissing me off. I didn't have to save
you. I could have kept going and never looked back; I didn't. So I saved
that precious honor of yours and all that royal blood you obviously think
you have from an eternity of servitude to that thing that came through
your closet. You don't have to like me, I'm not here to date you or even
hang out. You could show a little gratitude OK? I'm not asking for much,
just stop talking down to me like I'm a peasant. I promise as soon as I
can move around again I'll be out of your home."
Hire frowned and nodded slightly. "I apologize," she said
emotionlessly.
The girl stood and walked calmly out of the room. "Keep acting
like that and I'll have to call you Rei," he said as she walked out the
door. She stopped and gave him a hard glare just before walking out. "I
think I see why they chose her for this little deal. What a bitch."
TBC...
Where the hell did this come from? A friend of mine made me watch
La Blue girl and Twin dolls over at his house. He worships the dark side
of anime. It was disgusting, yet somehow intriguing. A few days later I
was playing Duke Nukem and watching the evil dead trilogy when this idea
came. [Some times you shouldn't do two cool things in one night, that's
how this kind of stuff gets born.] BTW Duke Nukem is where Robert got his
nick name. For some strange reason that I can't explain I didn't want his
real name to be Duke; even though that's what he'll go by for the rest of
the fic. He's what I got when I crossed Ash with Duke and subtracted
about seven years. Don't worry he's still in his pre-I'm sick of getting
my ass kicked by these monsters stage. He'll shape up and get cool real
quick, including the machoistic view of the babes. Also, just as Duke
did, he'll steal cool lines from lots of places.
"Hey you ugly four eyed dick! Gimme back my chicks!" said Duke as
he pulled a sawed off shotgun off his back and blew the largest monsters
arm off setting the young blonde free.
See wasn't that cool?!!
Ja,
Catbert25,
Who has been spending way too much time at the
' Bootylicious' since he turned 21.
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