Subject: Re: [FFML][BGC][Story idea]
From: "Christopher DiNote" <damobsta@hotmail.com>
Date: 11/25/1998, 3:32 AM
To: ffml@fanfic.com, daniel@milner.com





I was working on a scene for a BGC fanfic, and came up with the
following scene.  Leon finally gets sick of Priss's constant angst and
lets her have a peice of his mind.  Please tell me what you think of 
it...

<Snip scene>

Depends on the context you want to put it in.  I see it as two people 
who really NEED to talk to somebody about things they've never truly 
dealt with, but just keep putting them off and putting them off until 
they need to seriously vent, but neither of them feel that they have 
anybody to talk to.  From the original series, I always thought that 
Priss was a really noble, but selfish person who needed to show 
everybody how much of a badass she was.  From ADPolice Files and 
BGCrisis, Leon obviously has seen a lot of messed-up stuff, but hides it 
under a somewhat callous, took-cool-for-words exterior.  Either way, 
both dwell in the past, neither of them really has anybody to help them 
out, and neither are any good at helping each other, at least in your 
scene here.  If you justify this happening in the story well enough, I 
don't see why it shouldn't work.

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