At 10:38 PM 11/23/98 -0500, Greg Phillips wrote:

NICE story.  I'm really anxious to see what Taro's up to.  The only thing I
can gather (from the description given) is that he is going back to the
temple where the creature was sent from to get them to call it off or even
possibly make it his ally (they are both after Happosai, after all).  Or
something similar.  Though, since I don't think he knows WHERE it came
from, that would be a little far-fetched.

Wasn't the temple that Happi raided that started this mess back in Japan?
Pantyhose is pretty clearly entering the Musk Dynasty, which should be on
the other side of China.

And then we have what Nabiki's up to.  Never can quite tell with that girl.

I can't believe I forgot to mention this in my previous message, but I love
what you've been doing with Nabiki. Seeing her challenged like this will
make it all the more sweeter when she comes out on top in the end. Er, she
is coming out on top? Right?

Btw, the scene a chapter or two back about Akane and Nabiki regaining their
resolve to conquer their respective challenges from seeing Shampoo was
excellent. Really puts the girls in their place as well. *grin*

Anyway, again, let me repeat.  "NICE story."  Excellent work.  Hurry up and
do the next chapter.  :)

Agreed. 100% Especially that bit about the next chapter.


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Scott Pollert [pollerts@hsonline.net]