Mark, 

I want to publicly apologize to you for the semi-flame, full rant I sent
about your latest chapter of "Relentless."  I read it and basically went
into full denial that Ranma could EVER be such a complete jerk as he was
being to Ryouga and Ukyo.  Okay, I can believe it with Ryouga, but with
any female character except Akane, he's usually at least nice. (That's
my opinion, folks.  All right?)  

After reading your very even-toned and cordial responses to the true C&C
you've gotten, I understand better where you're heading with this
thread.  

Humbly yours,

Mike Allen

Er... thanks.  But I have to correct you on one point here - "Relentless"
is my story, not Mark's.  In any case, I didn't interpret your criticism as
a flame (semi or otherwise).  I appreciate honest C&C of any sort, even
when it's negative.

P.S.  Toru and the Musk.  Can anyone say Chiisuiton?  The how water
faucet from the Reikokuo won't faze him.  However, Tarou permanently in
monster form would be scary to say the least.

A correct deduction.  But that's not the ONLY part of his plan...

Grayson Towler
grayson@rigroup.net

http://www.rigroup.com/~grayson/relentless