(continued from first half...)
- - - - - -
The guards never even saw what hit them. With a pair of
lightning-quick, perfectly accurate strikes, Pantyhose Tarou
rendered them both unconscious. He grabbed hold of each of
their collars as they went limp, lowering them gently to the
floor so their armor wouldn't make much noise.
He paused to grin at his handiwork. He'd like to see Hibiki
or fem-boy pull THAT off.
He didn't have much time to spare, though. He crept soundlessly
down the hallway, blending into the shadows. He had a job to
do here - speed and stealth were of the essence. If everything
kept going smoothly, he'd have his prize and be long gone
before anyone in the Musk Dynasty knew he'd been there.
He knew he could have tried to force his way in. The elite
fighters of this ancient clan had reputations which even he
respected, but he doubted they'd be a match for his powerful
cursed form. He could have just barreled through their
defenses and taken what he wanted.
But this way was better - this way was smarter. Tarou would
have liked to test his strength against some of the great
warriors here, but now was not the time for such indulgences.
He had to stay focused on his plan. So long as the Reikoku
was out there, it was his top priority.
He chuckled to himself as he slipped past another defense post.
The guards were oblivious to his presence - he moved amongst
them like a ghost. This was a brilliant plan. If he could
pull this off, he'd not only defeat the Reikoku, but he would
become all but invincible. He just needed to keep his cool,
maintain his focus, and stick to his plan.
His revenge would come in due time.
- - - - - -
The first thing Ukyou noticed when she woke up was that the
winds had shifted. She leaned up on her elbow, feeling the
breeze on her skin to make sure she wasn't mistaken. For
two days, they'd been camped out at the base of this mountain,
unable to take a shot at the treacherous path across because
of the intensity of the winds above them. The villagers nearby
had warned them in no uncertain terms that trying to cross the
pass while the winds raged was suicide. But for the prey of
the Reikoku, staying still was suicide in another guise.
If the winds had shifted, then maybe the pass would be clear.
Ukyou scrambled out from under the covers, stood up, and...
She was nearly floored by the odor which the breeze had carried
to her nostrils. There was only one thing in the world that
made a smell like that - rotting carp. Ukyou was a little
surprised to realize that the foul stench was coming from
Ranma's direction.
For the past week or so, Ranma had been setting up camp a
good distance away from the two of them. He'd warned them
both that he was doing some sort of meditative training, and
that they shouldn't interrupt him. He refused to elaborate
further on the matter, but Ukyou had heard him making all
sorts of noises before he went to bed, clanking around with
buckets and branches over in his private encampment. She
hadn't the foggiest notion of what he could be doing, but
why did his sleeping area smell so terrible?
"Hey Ranchan!" she shouted. "Wake up!"
Ryouga rose blearily from slumber a few paces away. He
blinked around drowsily for a few moments, but his eyes bugged
out wide the moment he caught wind of the odor. He stared
around wildly for the source of the smell.
"Ranchan!" Ukyou shouted. "Is something wrong?"
Ryouga held his nose and glared in Ranma's direction. "What
the hell?"
Ukyou caught sight of some movement from Ranma's bed. The
pig-tailed martial artist was a heavy sleeper usually, but
she knew he hadn't been resting very well since he started
this weird training of his. He was always surly and cranky
in the mornings now. "Whaddya want?" he called back.
"It smells like you slept with a dead fish, Saotome!" Ryouga
snapped.
Ranma sniffed the air, winced, and waved reassuringly to
them. "It aint' a big deal. I'm gonna go clean up before
breakfast."
"The wind changed, Ranchan!" Ukyou exclaimed.
"Great," he grunted back. She had hoped he'd be a little
more enthusiastic - he was the one who was always pushing
for them to make better time - but it was a little too much
to expect this early in the morning. Well, she thought, the
only place to bathe was a nearby river that came out of the
mountains. If the icy water didn't wake him up, nothing
would.
Breakfast was all but ready by the time the shivering
Ranma-chan returned from the river. She scrambled up as
close to the campfire as humanly possible, twisting to try
to get as much of her body into the warmth as she could
manage. "P... put some more wood on, Ucchan," she begged
through chattering teeth.
"Just a sec, Ranchan. I don't wanna burn the breakfast."
Ryouga regarded the red-headed girl dubiously. "What were
you doing? What was with that smell?"
"S...shut up," she snapped. Ranma-chan dug into her breakfast
like a starving wolf the moment Ukyou set it in front of her.
"Really, Ranchan," Ukyou said between bites of her own
breakfast. "Why don't you tell us what you're up to?"
Ranma-chan grunted and washed down a mouthful with a swig
of coffee. "Don't you guys worry about it. I think I almost
got the hang of it now."
"Of what?" Ryouga asked.
"Somethin' that won't do you guys no good, believe me."
"It's just..." Ukyou tried to put the right mixture of
nonchalance and suggestiveness into her tone, "I was hoping
you wouldn't be sleeping so far away from me... us, I mean..."
Ranma-chan gave her that blank stare with which she'd become
all too familiar. Ukyou sighed. They didn't come much more
clueless than her fiancee.
"Feh," Ryouga snorted. "The farther the better, as far as
I'm concerned."
Ranma-chan gave him a black look. "Oh, is that so, P-Chan?"
"Don't call me that!"
Ranma-chan got a sly, malicious look on her face. "Maybe you
just want me away so you can try snugglin' up in another
girl's bed at night, eh piggy?"
Ukyou just about gagged. Ryouga bolted to his feet, his
face flushing red with anger and embarrassment. "Shut up,
Ranma!"
Ranma-chan pretended not to notice either of their shocked
reactions. "Listen, Ucchan, if Ryouga turns into the
wonder-pig and tries to put the moves on you, just whack him
with the spatula."
"How DARE you!" Ryouga snarled. He took a wild swipe at
Ranma-chan's head, which she ducked easily. His own momentum
sent him stumbling away.
"Ranchan..." Ukyou gasped.
Ranma-chan adopted a lazy stance, keeping her eyes on the
enraged Ryouga. She was feeling a bit vicious this morning,
and it was fun to tease this big lunk. "Oh sure, P-Chan, now
you get all mad. But you can't deny it, can you? You never
miss a chance to go crawlin' into Akane's bed, do you?"
"That's not true!" Ryouga howled, his voice sounding strangled
and tight. His next flurry of blows all missed their mark.
"Don't be shy!" Ranma-chan chided. "You're her widdle P-Chan!
I think you like it better that way!"
"Is... is that true?" Ukyou asked.
Ryouga broke off his attack, paralyzed by his intense shame.
He stared at her with horrified eyes, his mouth working
silently around words he couldn't bring himself to speak.
Ukyou had known that P-Chan was Akane's pet, but nobody had
ever told her that he slept in the same bed as the Tendou
girl. She and Akane weren't exactly the best of friends,
but Ukyou tried to imagine how she'd feel if something like
that were happening to her. If a guy took advantage of her
like that, she'd... she'd...
"How come you haven't told her?" she snapped at Ranma-chan.
The smug look of triumph disappeared from Ranma-chan's
features. She was expecting Ryouga to get the sharp end of
Ukyou's tongue (and probably a few good whacks from the
battle spatula). She hadn't expected to be on the defensive
all of a sudden.
"She... I..." Ranma-chan stuttered. Then she crossed her
arms and looked defiant. "It ain't like I haven't tried, you
know! Akane's just about the thickest girl in the world!
Is it my fault the she's too stupid to figure it out?"
"She's stupid all right," Ukyou muttered, seething with
anger. "She's stupid to EVER trust a pair of jackasses like
you!"
Ranma-chan was taken aback, but Ryouga was positively crushed.
He howled inarticulately, buried his tear-streaked face in his
hands, and sprinted off into the thicket of evergreens.
"Ryouga!" Ranma-chan called after the sobbing martial artist.
She glared back at Ukyou. "Now look what ya did!"
"What I did? Don't blame ME for this!"
"If he gets lost, it could take forever to find him!"
Ranma-chan exclaimed. "We gotta get movin' before the winds
change again, damn it!"
"All right, all right!" Ukyou threw up her hands in disgust.
"Let's split up and find the moron."
Without waiting for a response, Ukyou whirled and stalked
off into the woods, battle-spatula firmly in her grip.
Ranma-chan watched her leave, a perplexed look on her
face.
<Stupid enough to trust me, is it?> Ranma-chan thought
irritably. <What does SHE know? Akane ain't never trusted
me once in her miserable life. Besides, it ain't my fault
she's too big an idiot to figure out the truth for herself.
Maybe if she DID ever trust me for a single second, I'd...
I'd...>
The thought trailed off. Ranma-chan glared at the woods
sullenly, angry at both Ukyou and Ryouga. It's not like
it was Ukyou's business, anyway. She wished she'd never
brought it up in the first place. Still, she didn't have
time to stand around and mope about it - they needed to
find Ryouga, or they'd all be in a world of trouble.
Ranma-chan chose a direction at random and began her
search.
Ukyou stomped through the forest, grinding her teeth and
flexing her grip on her spatula. She couldn't decide which
one of those two jerks had her more pissed off. Part of her
wanted to take heart from the whole thing - if Ranchan treated
Akane that way, he couldn't possibly be serious about her as
a fiancee. That's how she wanted to see it, anyway. But she
couldn't help but think that if the positions were switched,
and if she was the one who was unknowingly inviting a disguised
boy into her bed every night instead of Akane, that Ranma
wouldn't react any differently. Not for the first time on
this whole trip, she wondered what kind of jerk she was engaged
to.
And as for Ryouga... boy, she was going to give that guy an
earful when she found him. She'd thought he was a relatively
nice, harmless, dim guy. She'd actually gotten to like him a
bit on this trip. Who would have thought he'd turn out to be
a pervert of the first order? When she thought of him sneaking
into Akane's room, watching her dress, leering at her while
she slept...
Ukyou perked up as she heard a soft, distant sound. She
strained to listen... it sounded like somebody crying. That
had to be Ryouga. She hefted her spatula grimly and headed
towards the noise. She'd give him something to cry about...
He was sitting at the edge of a ravine, leaning against a
tree and weeping. Ukyou opened her mouth to shout at him,
then closed it again as she watched. He wasn't just crying
a little bit. His whole body convulsed with each body-wracking
sob. His voice sounded raw and hoarse. She'd never seen a
man cry his heart out like that.
"Oh Akane..." he gasped between his sobs. "I'm so... I'm
sorr..."
Ukyou lowered her spatula, her anger seeping away as she
watched the lost boy weep. It was hard to think about hurting
a guy who was torturing himself so thoroughly on his own. She
couldn't stay mad at someone who was so clearly in such pain,
even if he was a pervert.
She wasn't sure how long the crying went on. She wanted to
turn and leave him be, feeling embarrassed at intruding upon
him in a moment like this, but she couldn't afford to lose
track of him. Uncertain of what to do, she simply waited
silently behind him and watched as he twisted in a storm of
his own anguish.
Finally, his sobbing tapered off. He was running out of
energy - Ukyou had spent a few nights bawling herself to
sleep, and she knew that it took a lot out of you. Even a
guy like Ryouga couldn't keep it up forever.
"Go ahead," he said. "Hit me."
Ukyou nearly jumped out of her skin. How long had he known
she was there?
"I deserve it," he muttered in a dead tone. "I deserve it
all."
Ukyou caught her breath, and took a deep sigh. She moved to
sit down beside him, facing at an angle away from him. It
was too intense a situation to sit facing him, at least right
now. "I ain't gonna hit you, sugar," she heard herself say.
Part of her still wanted to smack him one, but the urge wasn't
strong now.
"Why not?" he whispered.
She shrugged. "How come you keep doin' it, if you know it's
wrong?"
"I don't... I don't do it on purpose," he said.
"That's not what Ranchan says," she observed.
He spat. "What the hell does HE know? He doesn't know what
it's like. He probably thinks I get some sort of cheap
thrill out of it. That's about the limit of his
understanding."
"Don't blame Ranma for this," Ukyou admonished. "He's not
the one who sneaks into her room, watches her get dressed,
and..."
"I don't do that!" he protested. His reaction was
instantaneous, and he sounded genuinely mortified. "I
could never... I wouldn't even THINK of..."
"But you do sleep with her, right?"
"..."
Ukyou let the silence hang between them for a little while
before she spoke up again. "You should stop it."
"You don't think I've tried?" he moaned. "I've tried and
TRIED to leave her behind forever, dozens of times. But every
time I always seem to end up going back, and I always end up
getting splashed..."
"If you wanted to, you could stop."
"I've... I've promised myself so many times," he explained in
a mournful voice. "I've vowed never to be P-Chan again.
But when I get splashed... it's like I lose all my resolve.
She calls to me, and I forget all the promises I made as a
man. All I can think of is how much I miss her, how warm I
feel when she holds me. I love her so much... I can't stay
away."
"Ryouga..."
"It's pathetic," he spat angrily, wiping his face with the
back of his hand. "It's a pitiful mockery of human love, but
it's all I've got. You can't know what it's like to be so
wretched and lonely. You're so cute and friendly, and
everybody likes you."
Ukyou blinked in surprise at that.
"It's different for me," he went on. "I... I'm so lonely.
So lonely all the time. And fate keeps bringing me back to
her, as her pet pig. Is that my destiny, to have only that
feeble excuse for love? There have been times... that I've
been willing to give up being human altogether. To live the
rest of my life as her little P-Chan... just so I could be
close to her."
Ukyou pivoted to stare at him, rendered speechless by the
way he'd bared his soul to her. Something he'd said struck
her as particularly chilling - he spoke of his resolve fading
when he turned into a pig. Ukyou had wondered about Ranma in
the past, about how his curse affected his mind. It often
seemed to her that his whole personality changed when his body
did. He was certainly willing to do all sorts of things that
he'd never dream of doing as a boy. He'd even wear dresses
and flirt with other guys. She'd even seen him go so far as
to pretend to be Ryouga's fiancee.
It had never occurred to her to wonder what the curse did to
the people who turned into animals. Did it affect their minds
as well? It sounded like maybe it did, from what Ryouga said.
A little piglet didn't have much room in its head for things
like promises and vows. All it knew was that it was small and
helpless, and that it wanted somebody to love and protect it.
Maybe when Ryouga changed, he became more like a piglet than
even he understood.
It occurred to her to wonder what happened to Tarou's mind
when he became that monster. She shuddered and refused to
think about the implications of that.
"Hey sugar," she said, "don't beat yourself up too much about
it, okay?" Right now, he didn't seem like such a pervert to
her anymore. "Believe me, I have some idea of how hard it is
to be in love with someone that you can't get close to."
He turned to look at her. "You... you understand?"
She shrugged. "I still don't think it's right, but I can't
blame you too much. I mean, I have to be honest with myself.
If I could turn into a puppy or something and snuggle up to
Ranchan, could I really stop myself? I really don't know."
Ryouga got a glazed look on his face and stared off into the
distance. "A... puppy."
"Ryouga?"
"Why... why couldn't I turn into a puppy?" he said, not really
addressing her directly. "That wouldn't be so bad. Everybody
likes puppies. Everybody wants to help a lost puppy. Nobody
takes a look at a puppy and says: 'Hey! I think I'll have
that for dinner!'"
Ukyou bit back a giggle. He whirled on her and looked
irritated.
"You think I'm kidding? Do you know how many times people
have tried to cook me as P-Chan? Do you? Neither do I!
It's happened so often that I've actually LOST TRACK!"
"Oh come on..."
"You're a cook! Don't tell me you never looked at P-Chan
and thought about making me into a pork okonomiyaki!"
"Ryouga, I..."
"All cooks do!" he ranted. "Do you know what it's like to
turn into a potential breakfast every time it rains? Do you
know what it's like to be hung up by your legs in a kitchen
and watching a chef prepare a stew for you? NO! Of course
you don't! A puppy... God, what I wouldn't GIVE to turn into
a puppy! Why do I have to turn into an edible little pig?
Why do I have to be so scrumptious?"
Ukyou couldn't contain herself anymore. Laughter erupted
from her in great waves. She rolled on the ground, clutching
her sides as she convulsed with mirth.
Ryouga glared at her angrily. "It isn't funny! This is my
life we're talking about."
She tried to bring herself under control and apologize, but
one look at his irate expression sent her back into a fit of
giggling and laughing. "S... scrum... scrumptious!" she managed
to gasp, then howled with hilarity.
Ryouga shook his head and found himself battling a grin of his
own. Laughing fits were infectious, and even Ryouga wasn't
immune. The whole situation was so absurd that it was, in a
way, funny. "Oh shut up," he grumbled, but he couldn't put
much force behind it.
Ukyou desperately tried to compose herself, but snickers
and giggles still escaped her unbidden. She made a show of
bowing formally before him. "I'm sorry... I'm sorry..."
Ryouga chuckled. "'Crouch of the Wild Tiger' technique,
eh?"
She looked up at him and batted her eyes winningly. "I'm
really sorry, sugar. Please forgive me!"
Ryouga's heart took a few bounces around his ribcage, and he
quickly turned away to hide his sudden embarrassment. "D...
don't do that. I forgive you. Geez."
She clapped him on the shoulder, then ruffled his hair. It
was a gesture she did without thinking, but it felt right
somehow. She hauled herself to her feet and offered her hand
to him. "Come on, Ryouga. Let's head back to camp. We've
gotta get through that pass before the winds get bad again."
Ryouga nodded wordlessly, then took a hold of her hand. He
stared at the back of her head as she led him through the
trees, his mind swirling through a muddy stew of emotions and
thoughts. <What a strange trip this has been,> he told
himself. That much, at least, was beyond dispute.
- - - - - -
"Nabiki? What's the matter, you look terrible!"
Tendou Nabiki turned to face her elder sister. She supposed
that she did look terrible. She didn't even really recall
making the trip from Ucchan's Okonomiyaki back to the Tendou
Dojo - it was all kind of a blur. She was in shock, she
realized. There was a time when she wouldn't have dreamed
of allowing herself to be seen in public looking rattled or
disheveled, but the past weeks had worn her composure down
to the barest of threads.
"Are you all right, Nabiki?" Kasumi sounded genuinely
concerned.
Nabiki stared at her with a stricken look. "Konatsu's
sick," she announced in a leaden tone. "He... he can't
work."
"Oh dear, that's too bad," Kasumi said. "Are you hungry?
You look so tired."
"He's sick," she repeated numbly. "He passed out from
exhaustion. I... I worked him into the ground."
"Well I'm sure he'll get better with some rest," Kasumi
assured her.
Nabiki shook her head slowly. It all felt like a terrible
dream. "You don't understand. We're... we're on the edge
right now. If we miss even a day of business... the
restaurant will go under. We can't afford... to close
down."
Nabiki hardly noticed that her sister had gently herded her
into the dining room and sat her down at the table. Her
body was on autopilot while her brain turned her unsolvable
dilemma over and over.
"Would you like some tea and a snack?" Kasumi asked.
"We're doomed," Nabiki said with certainty.
"Now, now. That's no way to talk. I'm sure you'll think of
something," Kasumi insisted. She bustled her way off to the
kitchen, humming to herself as she worked to prepare Nabiki's
food.
Nabiki had never experienced such acute failure in her life.
All her confidence had been eroded down to nothing since she'd
taken on management of Ucchan's. She, Tendou Nabiki, Nerima's
brightest business protege, had driven a well-established and
respected restaurant straight into the ground. It hadn't even
taken her a month to achieve this ignominious feat. Part of
her mind desperately cast about for something or somebody to
blame, but there was no denying it. She had made all the
mistakes. It was all her doing.
And then, there was Konatsu. Guilt was not an emotion with
which Nabiki was familiar, but she felt terrible about what
she'd done to the young ninja. Konatsu had given her his
complete loyalty from the first day on. At first, she'd been
amused by and even a little bit contemptuous of the servile
cross-dresser, dismissing him as nothing more than a
natural-born lackey with no will of his own. After time,
she'd discovered that it was hard to maintain such an
attitude towards a guy who worked his heart out for you
every waking hour.
But what had she done with that loyalty? She'd used it and
abused it. She'd taxed Konatsu to his limit in the restaurant
with her ambitious schemes and plans, and then she'd piled
even more duties on him. She'd kept Ucchan's open for longer
hours, trying to overcome the loss of profit, and he'd shouldered
the burden without a word of protest. She'd used the brilliant
ninja for her scams and plots, sending him out into the night
after work to spy on people and gather dirt on her classmates.
When she'd gotten desperate with the take-out service, she'd
pushed him even harder to find more blackmail victims for to
act as delivery workers. And she'd expected him to be up
bright and early the next day, to have the restaurant ready
for the breakfast crowd.
He'd never complained once. Had she really thought he was
spineless? Konatsu had given everything he had to that
restaurant, and he'd never once lost his good temper or friendly
smile. Even as his health had deteriorated, he'd kept on going
with all his might. When he collapsed from exhaustion today,
he hadn't been concerned about himself. All that mattered to
him was that he thought he'd failed her.
Konatsu possessed a kind of courage which Nabiki had never
before understood or appreciated. She had been the one who
failed him. That, she realized, was even worse than her shame
at ruining the business. He'd given her loyalty and devotion
that she'd done nothing to deserve, and she'd ground him into the
dust for it.
Tendou Nabiki had never felt so low.
"Here's some tea, Nabiki," Kasumi said as she set the cup down
in front of her sister. "And here are some bean buns I made."
"Th... thanks."
Kasumi settled herself primly down at the table and smiled at
her. "That should make you feel better. Have you thought of
anything?"
"There's... what can I do?" she moaned. "We don't have a
cook. We can't run the restaurant without a cook."
"Well, then perhaps you could hire one," Kasumi suggested.
"Until Konatsu gets better, that is."
"We can't afford it," Nabiki said, shaking her head. "Nobody
would work for the sort of salary that Konatsu makes."
"Perhaps you can find a friend to do it, then?" Kasumi
offered.
Nabiki wondered if there was anybody at Furinkan who qualified
as a friend anymore. Her recent blackmail blitz had not won
her any popularity points, and she'd never been the best-liked
girl in school to begin with. There'd been a time when she'd
have been able to blackmail or con somebody into doing the
job, but she didn't have the leverage left to pull it off.
"There's... nobody," she whispered.
"Maybe you could get someone, and promise to pay them back
later?"
Nabiki sighed and hung her head. "Nobody will be stupid
enough to do that. Sis, it's hopeless. I have to find someone
who can run the shop, cook the meals, and who will do it for
free. I have until tomorrow. There's... there's no way."
Kasumi patted her reassuringly on the shoulder and smiled.
"It sounds difficult, but there's always a way. Maybe we
can talk some more after I make dinner, okay?" The eldest
Tendou daughter rose from her place and shuffled back into
the kitchen.
Nabiki stared at the kitchen door, the wheels in her mind
turning. Her inner swindler offered up a solution which she
hadn't considered. She needed a cook, and she needed someone
who'd do it for free. Who else fit the bill... but her big
sister?
Kasumi could do it, she realized. Kasumi could cook just
about anything, and she had a nice friendly manner that
customers would love. And Kasumi would cheerfully cut her
own hand off if someone in her family asked her to do it.
She'd agree in a heartbeat. It would only be for a few
days, after all, until Konatsu got better. It was the perfect
solution.
Except...
Except it meant crossing a line that Nabiki had drawn for
herself years ago, when she'd first discovered how much fun
it was to scam money from the suckers of the world. She'd
always told herself that anybody who let themselves get
swindled got what they deserved. Her schoolmates, her friends,
and even her family were all fair game... everybody except
Kasumi.
Kasumi was the perfect sucker - it would be child's play to
con her into doing just about anything you wanted. She was
sweet-tempered, trusting, and gullible. And she'd always been
the only person who Nabiki would never consider drawing into
one of her scams. Kasumi was like Nabiki's sacred ground -
the last piece of her own innocence, a bit of her own soul
that had never been for sale.
<It's not so bad,> a voice within her whispered. <It's not
even really a con. You're just asking for her help, that's
all. It's only for a few days.>
But she knew that was all rationalization. Tendou Nabiki knew
a fast one when she heard it, even when it came from inside
herself. She had a choice now. Either she could let the
restaurant fail completely, or she could take advantage of
the one person in the world she'd sworn she'd never touch.
Nabiki rose slowly from the table. Her legs felt like they
were a thousand miles away, but they carried her all the
same towards the kitchen door. She watched her beloved
sister bustling about the kitchen, preparing another
gourmet-quality dinner with her usual understated brilliance.
Nabiki's mouth felt dry as a desert in midsummer.
"Hey sis?" she rasped.
Kasumi paused and turned to face her, a bright and open smile
on her face. "Yes, Nabiki?"
"I... I need your help with something."
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end of chapter six
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AUTHOR'S NOTES
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This chapter took me a lot longer to craft than the previous
ones. My thanks to those of you who have written me with
encouragement to keep writing. Fanfiction is, of course, a
luxury, and the past few months have seen precious little
spare time for me. And once you get out of the writing rhythm,
it can be a real challenge to get back in. Especially on a
transitional chapter like this one...
Anyway, I'm hoping the next one won't take so long, even with
the interruption of Christmas and such. The next chapter has
more action and conflict, so it shouldn't be so difficult...
I wrote a bit about the nature of the Jusenkyou curse in this
chapter and how it affects the minds of its victims. I'm aware
that this is a topic that gets debated now and then with a
certain fervor, and I'm not out to start another argument.
COMING SOON: Will all the training pay off when the Reikoku
catches up to Ranma and his friends? Can Akane's rise above her
hardships? Can her father actually help? What will Nabiki's
decision be? And what is Pantyhose Tarou up to, anyway?
COPYRIGHT STUFF: All the Ranma characters belong to Takahashi Rumiko,
and are licensed in America by Viz Communications.
GRT - November 1998
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