Subject: Re: [FFML][Short Fic / Idea]
From: "Shakudo Seikigi" <shakudo@hotmail.com>
Date: 11/18/1998, 10:45 AM
To: Becknkal@addax.bc.ca
CC: ffml@fanfic.com



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From: "Noriega" <becknkal@addax.bc.ca>
To: <ffml@fanfic.com>
Subject: [FFML][Short Fic / Idea]
Date: Tue, 17 Nov 1998 23:46:18 -0800

* Author's Notes:

I'm just throwing this fic idea to the FFML, cause I'd hate to see an 
idea
go to waste or rot in my hard drive. Somebody might like the premise of
this fic and continue it. For the mean time though, I'll see if I can
include this in my lists of "Things to do for future fics." ^_^ 

But it isn't likely going to happen. Just thought I'd warn you though. 

Oh yeah, if this has already been done, please tell me, I'd like to 
read
it.


Untitled
By Kahlil Noriega 

* Standard disclaimer: 
All rights belong to whoever owns them. I don't own any of these 
characters
and make no claim to do so.



" Is she ready? " A deep voice said from the darkness. 

" Yes. " Another replied

" Show me... ", The voice said as the sounds of typing echoed within 
the
confines of the dark room.

Monitors came to life as two men waited patiently in the dark, bathed 
in
the light from various monitors that surrounded them. 

One of the men was a young technician, sitting in front of one the 
room's
computer terminals. He wore a plain white lab coat as he adjusted his
glasses on his face. His hair was tied back into a loose ponytail as he
looked at the various monitors around him. The man that stood behind 
him
was older, dressed in a plain black suit. He wore his long hair loosely
behind him as he rubbed his mustache, looking over the data displayed 
on
the monitors before turning his eyes at the center of the room.  

Within the dark confines of the room, the sounds of machines can be 
heard
working as a large glass cylinder suddenly appeared in the darkness.
Glowing with a greenish tint as light streamed through the glass 
cylinder. 

The suited man turned away from the terminal and walked towards it. 
Looking
at the glowing glass tube with slight apprehension and was taken aback 
when
he saw what it contained... 

Within the glowing glass tube, floating in that green tinted liquid, 
was a
girl. Fair skinned, he saw and well endowed with womanly gifts. She had
short bluish black hair that floated freely around her. Her eyes where
closed and her head was slightly tilted forward as if asleep as her 
face
took on a mask of peace... 

The suited man could only stare in wonder at the girl floating within 
that
glass tube as he felt a slow tearing in his heart.

" Shall I wake her? " The technician said from where he sat at his
terminal.  

" Huh? " The man replied, confused as he turned to look at the man 
seated
behind the computer terminal.  

" Shall I wake her for you... " The man repeated.

"Yes. Yes, wake her..." the suited man answered quickly as he turned 
his
eyes to look at the girl again with a hopeful expression on his face.

" Akane... " The technician whispered in the microphone beside him. 

" Wake up now... There's some here to see you... " The doctor said 
gently.

Slowly, the girl's lips moved, opening and closing as she slowly opened 
her
eyes and tilted her head up to look at the kindly doctor and the man
standing before her.  

The suited man opened his lips as if to say something, but no words 
came
out as he just stared at her. 

Seeing the man before her, the girl turned dark-blue eyes at the man 
and
smiled...

" Akane... " The man whispered as he smiled... 


***

Somewhere else...

*** 


Roaring through the empty streets of the city, a lone biker broke the
silence of the night...

Streetlights bounced off sleek red steel as the rider pulled back on 
the
bike's handles and accelerated. Soaring through the air as the ground
suddenly dropped underneath him before gravity pulled his bike again to 
the
ground. Landing on his hind wheel as he sprinted off into the night.   

The rider wore a red leather jacket and tight black leather pants as 
light
>from the lampposts reflected back from his visor. His pigtail peeked 
out
>from underneath his red helmet.  

Ranma rode through the empty streets of the city as the night sky 
thundered
overhead...

~ End?

Cool.



Synopsis (IDEA) of the fic:

The year is 2051... 

What's so bad about 2052!? ^_^


Corporate empires have taken over most of the world's governments. In 
this
hi-tech world of corporate intrigue and espionage, information is a 
deadly
weapon. Keeping their secrets safe is high priority for these corporate
powers, with hackers always trying to get into theirs systems.

Oh no!


And thus the Eve Project was born... 

The corporate power MegaSoft (?) has designed the perfect unit to hold
their secrets.

Cute too.

Unfortunately, they lost her...

Oh no!


* Please note that it doesn't necessarily have to be Ranma characters, 
I'm
using them more for their looks.

Tentative list for the Cast of the Characters and their respective 
roles...

Akane/Ranko:
-The girl everyone's after ^_^ 

Don't we know it!


Ranma: 
-Independent rogue caught in the crossfire.
-Biker leader

Ranma: I got 50 guns and nothin' better to do...

Ryouga:
-Friend of Ranma
-Love conflict.

Ryoga: Ranma, I love you! @_@

-Biker member

Ukyou:
-Friend of Ranma 
-Love conflict

I wonder if we can loan the BFS-9000?

Soun:
-Head of MegaSoft
-His daughter's are CEO's in the company

Two CEOs? Is Kasumi supposed to be part of the front company?

Happosai:
-Leader of an Underground Organization

Happosai: Hentai of wolrd! Unite!

Colonge:
-Head of a rival company

Acually, (seriously) let's make her the figurehead prime minister,

Mousse:
-Employee of rival company

Shampoo:
-Rival company's assassin/agent

And Mousse and Shampoo can be those hackers you were talking about.

Anyway, that's that for my rant. ^_^

Rant? What rant? I didn't see a rant. Did you see a rant?

Sincerely
~ Kahlil Noriega ~

I'm still not sure if I want to get involved though, I'm really falling 
behind on my university work. All I can say is, wait to see what 
develops.


- Shakudo -
Eternal Worshiper of Makoto Kino, Ukyo Kuonji, and Kiyone Mabiki.
Holder of the files of Ranma Nibun no Usugurami and Sailor Moon D

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