Yo Matt, you wrote this:

Date: Mon, 16 Nov 1998 16:32:19 -0500
To: ffml@fanfic.com
From: Matthew Lewis <maybeso@ican.net>
Subject: [FFML] [Ranma] Soul of Ice: Thesis

Before I get to my minor nit I'd just like to say:  "Love the fic, it 
was very chilling... get it?  Chilling?  BWAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!...  Oh, I 
kill me..."


Anyway, here ya go:

   A grin which proved to be premature at best. Ranma held the two
of them in front of him by their wrists; Ryouga on Ranma's left and
Tatewaki on his right. They were kneeling before him. No one had
seen Ranma move. One moment Ryouga and Tatewaki were almost flying
at Ranma with their desire to punish him, and the next they were
kneeling in front of him. Ryouga and Ranma did not even register

                           ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Ummm... I think that, unless his training has become REALLY instinctive, 
Ranma would register moving.


Overall:  Fantastique, though chapters 8 and 10 kinda confused me...

"This is ponderous man, really ponderous..."
       -2nu

?_?
Brian, singing off...

______________________________________________________
Get Your Private, Free Email at http://www.hotmail.com