Richard, I would like to salute you for this wonderful look back at one of my
favorite shows from the '80s (at the time I had no clue that Voltron was
japanese; I just liked it.)  I think that you got Keith and Allura perfest
(despite the chopped-up nature of the first Voltron series.)

Actually I liked trying to figure out if the piece was either based on a
series or if it was an Original Flavor.  Of course I had a good idea about the
source by the middle of the story.

I will be looking to see for any future installments of this story.  (I just
might have to look into watching the new episodes of Voltron.)  And IMO I
think that the title is just right.  (This oming from a person with only one
fanfic under his belt.  I'm trying.)

James Holzhauer (aka Tobimaro [Ton-chan])
       ---my rewrite of my Shattered Dreams should be coming out within the
week.