To all MSTers, I hereby challenge you to MST a large fic.  You don't 
have to do all of it and you can snip whatever you want.  Don't worry 
about the author, since it's me.  Spare me no slash.  Pound the living 
snot out of this fanfic and I'll finally be at ease with it.
  Somethings you should know: This was written about five years ago.  I 
had just finished reading both the "Crys Saga" (original) parts 1-18 and 
"The Twisted Path" parts 1 and 2 and, like most naive beginners, I 
thought to myself, "I can outdo BOTH of them!"
  After about the second chapter, my heart just wasn't in it.  I was 
entering into a "Power Rangers/Combination Attacks are COOL" stage mixed 
with a "RPGs are the greatest things since sliced bread and digital 
watches!".  So, I made it as stupidly incoherent as I could as I was 
shifting between these vast different worlds.  Ugh!  I thought I had 
hallucinated some of the scenes, but there they were.  On the screen and 
in plain sight.
  About the eleventh chapter, I had pretty much given up on trying to 
make a good, serious story and was throwing in whatever stupid random 
thought hit me.
  How to best describe how bad it is... hmmmm.  Ever heard of a 
half-vampiric Ranma-cursed time-traveling immortal know-it-all dragon 
that has a vampiric dragon half-sister trapped as Yamoto no Orochi, yet 
starts out dumb as a brick?
  Neither did I until I finished the story.  After all, I was going for 
random and stupid.  And to think, I actually tried to make it angsty at 
one point.

  Anyway, as of 11-19-98, the story will be at: 
http://www.geocities.com/Tokyo/Island/3968/bad1.txt

  For those of you who are still interested, but can't get to Geocities 
for some reason, e-mail me and I'll put forth the effort of hacking it 
up and sending it out to you.

Ben McCrillis <aka. A-kun> <aka. Sailor Scottish>

  "Never be afraid to laugh at your faults.  Just don't reject them.  
They will merely get more painful as time progresses." - A-kun

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