At 03:38 PM 11/16/98 -5000, Derek Sherman wrote:
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I liked this one. No alterations of character to force a romantic 
event, no subtle twists to get Tenchi and Kiyone together (not that I 
don't think they'd make a good couple, but some people's ideas of how 
to get them together....well.....)...

That was my point for this one: WAFF doesn't mean that the characters
have to get together in any romantic sense. Two friends, two comrades,
two people can share a moment without the spectre of romantic
involvement rearing its head.

Simple, succint, and very in-character. Excellent job!

Thanks, because you just described exactly what it was I wanted to
do in it.

Derek 

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Sheen watched his flight. "I forgot to mention the most
important thing," he murmured. "If there's one thing a mind
can't avoid, it is its automatic aversion to evil. The
moment he lets it into himself, he places his feet on the
road to demolition."
 		    -excerpt from A Billion Days of Earth
			by Doris Piserchia
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