Subject: [FFML][TM!][Challenge Response]For the Love of Kiyone, Chapter 1
From: Keiichi_dono@scifianime.com
Date: 11/16/1998, 5:34 PM
To: Enderphd@aol.com, ffml@fanfic.com

           


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Original Text from  Enderphd@aol.com

youre gonna write one? no fair! sooo much competition...mine wont be 
very
good... if you write one, emial it to me! I have a feeling i'll enjoy 
it! =)
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Here you go--and of course it'll be good!  I am the High Priest of 
the Temple of the Teal-tressed Goddess after all ^^!	

For The Love of Kiyone


A Tenchi-Muyo fanfic by Keiichi Masaki
(Keiichi_dono@hotmail.com, Keiichi_dono@scifianime.com)


Tenchi and Kiyone Masaki (did I hear a collective faint?  Good!), as 
well as the rest of the cast from Tenchi-Muyo!, are the property of 
Pioneer and AIC.

Author's note/rant: This is my response fic to Dr. Tran's challenge 
on the FFML, and to a similar one made at GenSao's this weekend.  
Ten-Kiyo fics are my stock in trade (no apologies whatsoever to the 
RFFC), and so, being the High Priest of the Temple of the 
Teal-tressed Goddess, it falls to me.


(Author ducks rocks and bricks thrown by various RFFC members bearing 
the words "traitor" and "heretic")

Well� on with the fic:

Chapter 1: Up On The Roof

	"Kami-sama, don't they ever give it a rest?!" Tenchi was 
stretched out on the roof, staring into the night sky.  "Good thing 
it's summer," he mused to himself, "or I'd be freezing up here."
	The house rocked with another explosion.
	Tenchi sighed.  For some reason, the fights between Ayeka and 
Ryoko had been getting more violent the past few weeks.  All it would 
take these days was for their eyes to meet, and bang!  The house 
would need a new wall.  
	Good thing Washu works for food, he thought.
	"Tenchi?  Tenchi, you up there?"
	"Eh?"  Tenchi leaned over the edge of the roof and looked 
down.  Kiyone was standing halfway up the ladder, peering up at him. 
 "Oh, Kiyone.  Come on up."  He reached down a hand to her.
	"Thanks."  Kiyone took his hand and hauled herself onto the 
roof.  She seated herself next to Tenchi, and smiled wryly at him.  
"Up here for some peace and quiet?"
	"Not like there's any in the house," Tenchi agreed.
	As if to underline his statement, the house shook again.
	Kiyone sighed.  "That sounds like another wall."
	"Wait�" Tenchi held up his hand, waiting expectantly, and 
brought it down at the very moment of another explosion.  "That 
sounded more like two walls..." The house shook a final time.  "�and 
a support beam.  Washu'll be earning her breakfast tomorrow."
	"What were they fighting about this time?" asked Kiyone.
	"Sasami had made some rice cakes.  Ryoko and Ayeka's hands 
met over the last one."
	Kiyone winced.
	"Yeah, I know."
	"Have you tried talking to them?" Kiyone inquired.
	Tenchi's face went red.  "I've tried."
	"Tenchi�" Kiyone sounded exasperated, just a few notches 
above when she was dealing with Mihoshi's blunders.  "This'll go on 
forever unless you try to stop them� unless you decide between the 
two of them."
	"I know� you're right, of course�" Tenchi blew out an 
exasperated breath. "I've tried, you know.  And every time�"
	"Are you in love with either of them?" pressed Kiyone.
	"I� I don't know anymore.  When Ayeka first arrived, I 
thought I could love her, but then I started getting closer to Ryoko, 
but every time I tried to tell one or the other, something happened, 
the moment passed� and ever since we went back in time to save Mom 
and Dad, the littlest things set them off!  You've seen it; in the 
past month we've had to replace five walls, the TV, the stairs, Dad's 
car, and the entire kitchen!  If it wasn't for Washu, Dad would be 
even further in debt!"
	"I know, I've been there, remember?" she reminded him.
	"And the worst thing of all� this may sound a little 
egotistical, but� sometimes I don't think either of them care about 
me.  Oh, I know I've seen a lot of evidence to the contrary, but the 
way they fight, and the way nothing or no one else matters when their 
ire is up� sometimes I just feel like one more think to fight over."
	"That's understandable, and not as egotistical as you think, 
Tenchi."  Kiyone abruptly shivered.  "Ungh� getting a little cold out 
here."
	"That tends to happen when you go up on the roof in shorts 
and a T-shirt."  Tenchi undid the sash of this shrine tunic and 
pulled it off, then draped it around Kiyone's shoulders.  "There.  
Better?"
	"Mmm, much.  Thank you."  Kiyone wrapped the tunic tighter 
around herself.  "You were saying?"
	"Oh, yeah.  Now� I dunno� there's no nice way to say it, 
y'know?  I've been trying to find those feelings again, but� I don't 
love either of them, Kiyone.  Not anymore.  Sometimes, I start to 
wonder if I ever did."
	"That's understandable," Kiyone responded.  "You're 
only-what?  Seventeen?"
	"Yeah."
	"Believe me, when I was your age, I was second-guessing 
myself on an hourly basis.  And you have to admit that the 
circumstances you live in aren't exactly normal by any stretch of the 
imagination."
	Tenchi smiled at Kiyone.  "Thanks.  I guess I needed that."
	"And you also need to tell the two of them how you feel-or 
don't feel," she continued.  "I know you don't want to hurt them, but 
leading them on like this, however unintentional, isn't helping 
matters."
	"You're right," agreed Tenchi.  "There's just one thing that 
worries me."
	"Oh?"
	"If I tell them this-they may get really angry, and that I'd 
expect, but more than that, they may become convinced that someone 
'stole me away.'  They may feel a need to fight for me."
	Kiyone didn't bother to stifle the snort of amusement.  
"Neither of them are big on logic, are they?"
	"Not really."  Tenchi smiled at Kiyone again.  "You know, I 
feel a lot better now.  Ever thought of doing this professionally?"
	"Counseling people?  Sorry, but no one in Japan would accept 
my college diploma."  
	After their laughter had subsided, Tenchi leaned back, laying 
on his back again.  "Y'know, in all the time we've know each other, 
you've never talked much about yourself."
	Kiyone chuckled and shifted around, so she could look at her 
companion.  "Oh, it's a very boring story�"
	"A boring story would be a nice change from all the 
excitement around here," he countered.  "So, talk."
	"Well, all right.  I grew up on a world called Megami�"
	They spent the next two hours talking on the roof before 
moving inside to continue the conversation.  As the night grew 
colder, neither of them noticed the moment when they drew together, 
for warmth.  When Tenchi wrapped an arm around Kiyone and she 
snuggled closer, neither of them was aware that it was for anything 
other than staying warm.  Nor did they notice that when Kiyone went 
to bed, she was still wearing Tenchi's tunic.
	Someone else would notice, however.

End Chapter 1

Please C&C.  Ch. 2 will be out soon.


Keiichi Masaki, High Priest of the Temple of the Teal-tressed Goddess, Kiyone Makibi



Member of the Kiyone Ring and the Tenchi Ring



Co-writer, Mugen Tenchi Muyo!

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